"Please" - an Audio Story

[bisexplicit]

Alright, I'm in the process of trying to figure out this whole audio story thing...I believe this link will let you listen to the first few paragraphs I have recorded. Feedback would be wonderful, thanks!

http://us.f3.yahoofs.com/msgr/passioness04/.tmp/please2ndtry.mp3?msqxShCBtAIBrpRx

 

[Guest]

Great voice. Good voice acting. The only downside, is you need to move your microphone out a bit--I'm hearing a lot of popping of breath against the microphone.

Otherwise, Good job!

 

[bisexplicit]

Great voice. Good voice acting. The only downside, is you need to move your microphone out a bit--I'm hearing a lot of popping of breath against the microphone.

Otherwise, Good job!

Thanks! I just didn't want it to be too quiet either...I'll try to find a good balance.

 

[silverwhisper]

bi: now that i've listened to it, a few thoughts:

1. as ted mentioned, you're much too close to the mic.
2. good grief, but i feel like a dirty old man: you sound so young!

[freaks out a little]

ed