Plausibility

[R. Richard]

A huge myth is that you should never hit first.
Yeah, sure.
If a guy is in your face and pumping himself up(and they do especially the guys buds are around) you just hit fast and hard an in a way he will not be getting up from.
My first Sensei taught me "Honor in the ring, is an honorable thing. In the street honor's for dead men."

You should never hit first. When the scumbags come they ask, "Who hit first?" Your answer should always be, "The other guy hit me and I blacked out." Truth is for those who wish honor.
I try to avoid punching another guy. I much prefer a forearm smash, a kick (usually to the knee) or a finger poke to the eyes.
Honor in the kwoon is a necessity. Honor in the street is for the insane.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I put THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER aside as you cant sell me on the idea that a goddess-beauty can marry and murder a different rich guy every single day of the week. The whole deal is absurd. Yet millions love the book.

 

[Zephouz]

While I'm just starting writing for Literotica, I kinda failed with my first story. I understand all stories, actually. I get what they are doing, how, when, why, stuff like that. But I feel like, I focus on a few things
- Storyline (Back story as to why a brother and sister would miraculously start to fuck each other)
- Characters (Nobody is perfect, a character has to have flaws)
- Outside thought (Like, a neighbor knows whats going on, and supports it. Wtf?)
I understand, I'm not what you would call an Author. It's a shame I even posted the chapter one of a story I don't really have an interest in continuing for the fact I feel as if I failed it from the start. I just find it impossible to have characters that are perfect, don't have a storyline, and everyone supports what they are doing. I just...don't like those stories.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

While I'm just starting writing for Literotica, I kinda failed with my first story. I understand all stories, actually. I get what they are doing, how, when, why, stuff like that. But I feel like, I focus on a few things
- Storyline (Back story as to why a brother and sister would miraculously start to fuck each other)
- Characters (Nobody is perfect, a character has to have flaws)
- Outside thought (Like, a neighbor knows whats going on, and supports it. Wtf?)
I understand, I'm not what you would call an Author. It's a shame I even posted the chapter one of a story I don't really have an interest in continuing for the fact I feel as if I failed it from the start. I just find it impossible to have characters that are perfect, don't have a storyline, and everyone supports what they are doing. I just...don't like those stories.

Writing is like having a club foot or harelip or big ears. Fewer writers make it than guys who dream of the NFL or MLB. So fuck the critics and one-bombers and AH English nannies, and have fun.

 

[8letters]

Quote:
Doctors are looking into the mystery of an American man who awoke speaking only Swedish, with no memory of his past, after he was found unconscious four months ago at a motel in southern California.

Weird, hardly plausible, but true?

Mystery probably solved

A medieval re-enactment society in Sweden claims to have solved the mystery of an American who awoke in a California motel room earlier this year insisting his name was Johan Ek and communicating only in Swedish, despite an ID card naming him as US-born Michael Boatwright.

Members of the Swedish branch of the Society for Creative Anachronism, however, knew him by yet another name: Strongbow, a keen participant of the group's jousting team.

"He was pretty good at jousting - one of the better performers," SCA member Johan Cassel told The Local, an English-language Swedish news website.

The American lived in Sweden in the 1980s, Mr Cassel said, where he picked up the language. "He could speak pretty good Swedish, although you could hear that he came from an English-speaking country. He had an accent," he said.

Mr Cassel also recalls 'Strongbow' being friendly with a man called Ragnvald Göransson Ek, so speculates that was where the name 'Johan Ek' came from.

 

[sr71plt]

My first story has been submitted, so even though I am not officially an author yet, I hope you don't mind me posting my two cents

Some implausibilities that bother me:
1. A good-looking man/woman with a great personality who is looking for romance but has no romantic interests
I started Angels and Demons and when the hero met the gorgeous Ph. D. physicist in the CERN lab with no love interests, I put it down. I find it lazy writing to have the perfect mate basically come into being when the hero walks into the room. Of course, this happens all the time on Literotica.

2. Good-looking women are almost always bisexual
I enjoyed the Home for the Holidays series. In it, the only daughter of a couple invites three female friends home for Thanksgiving. It turns out that all five women in the story are bisexual, four of which discover it over the weekend. My understanding is that true bisexuality is rare and causes a lot of problems because each gender partner feels betrayed when the bisexual person goes off with the other gender. I am not saying that it shouldn't be in a story, but it should be treated as something unusual like incest. This too happens all the time on Literotica.

3. A person is happy to share their Significant Other
I enjoyed The Pool Payments series. In it, over a summer the husband boffs several of his wife's best friends as "payment" for using his pool. Later on, it turns out that wife had encouraged the first fling, knew about the others and was mildly disappointed in him. Seriously? If he cheated so quickly and easily in just one summer, who often did he cheat on her before? Won't he cheat again? It would totally destroy the trust in the relationship. Any time a partner strays, the other partner feels threatened and the relationship is strained. To treat it like the husband forgot to stop by the grocery store again diminishes the story. This too happens all the time on Literotica.

4. Mother and daughter look like sisters
A common trope in incest stories and it never happens. The writer is too lazy to figure out how to make the Mom attractive, so he/she makes her look like she is twenty years younger. Mature women can look damn attractive, but they don't look like they did when they were twenty. See Angelina Jolie.

5. Someone has sex over and over again in the same day
Any time a writer has someone come more than three times in the same sex session, my eyes start glazing over. Too much is just too much.

6. A couple has no relationship problems after the first time they have sex
In Friday by Robert Heinlein, the heroine picks up a married guy in a bar for a one night stand and they are instantly best friends for the rest of the story. Commitment and trust are things that are earned, not instantly bestowed just because you fuck once. Love doesn't mean that you no longer have problems with the one you love, it means that you are willing to work through the problems.

Again, I'd have to just repeat that you don't seem to get why most are coming here to read the stories. It doesn't have anything to do with real life.

 

[lovecraft68]

You should never hit first. When the scumbags come they ask, "Who hit first?" Your answer should always be, "The other guy hit me and I blacked out." Truth is for those who wish honor.
I try to avoid punching another guy. I much prefer a forearm smash, a kick (usually to the knee) or a finger poke to the eyes.
Honor in the kwoon is a necessity. Honor in the street is for the insane.

When there are three of them and you are with your girlfriend that they have been catcalling for the last two blocks before catching up with you....

You hit first and you hit hard and you hit the 2nd one before the first one is even on the ground.

I prefer survival to honor and I am talking about the street, read my post.

You know what is a great invention?

The car keys that fold in and you hit the button and they snap out like a switchblade.

Fantastic.

 

[RoyceConnors]

Most things are plausible if they say within the internal logic of the story.

I agree with Jomar on this. If fantastical human attributes are what the story is about, then perfect bodies on women and 10" cocks are sported by every guy that's GQ quality in looks.

If real life is supposed to be portrayed to some degree of plausibility, human failings have to be taken into account of their reality. Complaints would happen if the writer missed the mark on the genre they were writing in.

Plausible happens, when the reader reads about something they've never done, but it's possible someone else has done, or could physically do, or have happen. Pushing the boundaries, brings it to SciFi, or otherworldly realms.

 

[LOAnnie2]

5. Someone has sex over and over again in the same day
Any time a writer has someone come more than three times in the same sex session, my eyes start glazing over. Too much is just too much.

Please explain how this is implausable? I won't even get into the fact that some women are multi-orgasmic. However, if you're seeing this in the mature category, I won't disagree.

 

[robertreams]

I get it all the time. I was told that my character had the ailments of a person in his 70s and he was only supposed to be in his late 60s.

I was told it was unrealistic for someone to be surprised that a cock was uncircumcised. The only other uncircumcised cock I have see in 68 years of living are those of my sons and brothers.

I was told it was implausible for someone to feel pain upon their first anal intercourse.

These are just a few.

 

[robertreams]

excuse me, but my wife is 65 and I won't even start to cum until she has had at least three orgasms.. This is not bragging, but 31 years of experience.

Also. . . Cumon folks. . .Ain't we in the fantasy business?

 

[robertreams]

heel dust works well

 

[TE999]

I get it all the time. I was told that my character had the ailments of a person in his 70s and he was only supposed to be in his late 60s.

I was told it was unrealistic for someone to be surprised that a cock was uncircumcised. The only other uncircumcised cock I have see in 68 years of living are those of my sons and brothers.

I was told it was implausible for someone to feel pain upon their first anal intercourse.

These are just a few.

Let me guess, most of those comments were from anonymous, right? I automatically erase those. Anyone who doesn't have the guts to sign their name to a critique is not worth my time.

 

[robertreams]

here here! I hate anonymous, also if he/she is anonymous, you can be sure he/she didn/t rate your story.

 

[sr71plt]

Oh, I think that almost anyone making the effort to post a comment, even as anonymous, is also voting--especially when they realize you can erase the comment but not the vote. (And isn't it "hear, hear"--from the British Parliament custom?)

 

[lovecraft68]

This reminds me of the guy (and it had to be a guy with this detail) asked me to look at his story and tell him what I thought.

he had the girl masturbating with a dildo he described as 8" and thick. Then later when she had sex(her first time) she felt a sting of pain as her hymen broke.

I told him that cherry popped long ago with an 8" toy being shoved in there.

He ended up getting nasty with me and said I was too picky. After telling me he asked my opinion because he thought I had good attention to detail in stories.

Got a few bombs after that last e-mail.

 

[HeyAll]

I watched Pacific Rim recently. People will accept the fact that there are giant monsters from another dimension, and that the world governments decided to build giant robots to fight them instead of simply building more advanced weapons.

IF that movie featured a guy falling from a 10 feet building, landing on his head, and then getting up and walking away... people would say, "What the hell kind of bullshit is that!?"

People are willing accept certain things if it's for the sake of a story and you build it up right.


With the case of a 10 inch cock, first of all, those actually do exist.

Most readers cringe when they see that; a guy has sex with a 34DDD woman with ease and he pulls out a 10 inch cock. That'll likely get a low score and negative remarks.

BUT... One of the most popular mother/son stories of all times is a story called "Replacing my Cum Bucket."

In that story, a son has a giant cock. The mom is a doctor and she insisted on finding out what's wrong with him, only to discover his 'problem' and she's shocked by it. It eventually lead to sex.

People are willing to accept that because there's realistic dialogue and build up to (storywise at least).

If you make an effort to tell a good story and have fun with it, people will accept it.

 

[sr71plt]

BUT... One of the most popular mother/son stories of all times is a story called "Replacing my Cum Bucket."

In that story, a son has a giant cock. The mom is a doctor and she insisted on finding out what's wrong with him, only to discover his 'problem' and she's shocked by it. It eventually lead to sex.

People are willing to accept that because there's realistic dialogue and build up to (storywise at least).

Actually, I'd accept a guy surviving a ten-foot (I assume you meant "story," though) header before I'd accept this scenario. I think one of the most amusing exercises on Literotica is to review the "help me find" messages here and see the really crappy incest situations that readers are salivating over to find.

 

[lovecraft68]

To think the above post is by a person who constantly whines his stories get trolled.

Perhaps if he did not insult the sites readership on a fairly regular basis, it might not happen.

 

[lovecraft68]

I watched Pacific Rim recently. People will accept the fact that there are giant monsters from another dimension, and that the world governments decided to build giant robots to fight them instead of simply building more advanced weapons.

IF that movie featured a guy falling from a 10 feet building, landing on his head, and then getting up and walking away... people would say, "What the hell kind of bullshit is that!?"

People are willing accept certain things if it's for the sake of a story and you build it up right.


With the case of a 10 inch cock, first of all, those actually do exist.

Most readers cringe when they see that; a guy has sex with a 34DDD woman with ease and he pulls out a 10 inch cock. That'll likely get a low score and negative remarks.

BUT... One of the most popular mother/son stories of all times is a story called "Replacing my Cum Bucket."

In that story, a son has a giant cock. The mom is a doctor and she insisted on finding out what's wrong with him, only to discover his 'problem' and she's shocked by it. It eventually lead to sex.

People are willing to accept that because there's realistic dialogue and build up to (storywise at least).

If you make an effort to tell a good story and have fun with it, people will accept it.

Again, its subjective. I will click off a 34ddd story. I certainly do not consider myself high brow and can handle hard to believe "situations", but if the visual conjured makes me roll my eyes, its off to the next story.

I had a main character be on the small chested side. I never gave measurements, but had her describe them as not very big, but well shaped and perky.

she was a slender girl so they were not out of place on her, but I made mention several times over the chapters that she was jealous of girls with big chests and had the other characters make a few jokes about them being small.

I got several remarks from readers saying they enjoyed that she was not the "typical" big busty sister. I was surprised at the time, but that was two years ago. I've read a lot more stories since then and now I understand.

 

[HeyAll]

I get a lot of the same messages, about readers thinking it's great that the sizes are realistic.

I used to be compelled to describe the woman's hair color and bra size, and so forth. But now I just stick to general descriptions when it comes to appearance, "Her breasts were small and perky," or "she was a busty woman."

Readers can use their own imagination for what they want the leading lady to look like.

 

[RoyceConnors]

Plausible= believable
Believability = factuality

If there's nothing to base the reality on, it falls into fiction and fantasy (real or imagined) Oddities happen in nature and that's what lies beyond the 'norm' of everyday life and the exposure to media presented models of the norm.

Siamese twins is a clear example of an oddity that most people are clueless about, but those who are conjoined, can relate some interesting experiences we'd find almost bizarre in nature. Seniors taking Viagra have decades of experience and a new found enjoyment of equipment working again. making for some wild skin flapping sex. Young readers can't imagine doing it the ways age allows us to explore what it's all about.

All we write is sex and explore the boundaries of reality, to present a story that appeals to most and titillate the senses. Laws might be in place, but readers want the boundaries pressed and fantasies brought to light. We have to find that boundary and find a way to present a unique take on it, if a writer wants to take that on.

I find the greatest challenge to a writer, is writing as far outside his/her comfort zone and do well. Bringing a reality to a subject they have no experience in, shows a true depth of their abilities.

 

[driphoney]

I collect stuff from my own experiences to toss in the bowl. Like the aunt and uncle who come to town for a visit. He's an alcoholic, and when he forgot to stock up for Sunday; so he tapped my old mans supply, and before too long my aunt wanted a ride back to the motel. And at the motel she turned on the radio and wanted to dance, and moved my hand down on her ass.

And if I put it in a story I'll get BULLSHIT COMMENTS. I'm writing one today about an MD who sold her pussy. True story. She was married, we met online, I tapped her a few times, and she started selling it. This will get BULLSHIT too.

And here I thought you were just a grandpa writin’ stories and hangin’ on a porn site.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Plausible= believable
Believability = factuality

If there's nothing to base the reality on, it falls into fiction and fantasy (real or imagined) Oddities happen in nature and that's what lies beyond the 'norm' of everyday life and the exposure to media presented models of the norm.

Siamese twins is a clear example of an oddity that most people are clueless about, but those who are conjoined, can relate some interesting experiences we'd find almost bizarre in nature. Seniors taking Viagra have decades of experience and a new found enjoyment of equipment working again. making for some wild skin flapping sex. Young readers can't imagine doing it the ways age allows us to explore what it's all about.

All we write is sex and explore the boundaries of reality, to present a story that appeals to most and titillate the senses. Laws might be in place, but readers want the boundaries pressed and fantasies brought to light. We have to find that boundary and find a way to present a unique take on it, if a writer wants to take that on.

I find the greatest challenge to a writer, is writing as far outside his/her comfort zone and do well. Bringing a reality to a subject they have no experience in, shows a true depth of their abilities.

When I come across something odd I like to explore it, to learn how it happened, because the info may be useful on another occasion. The late Milton Erickson, MD tested hunches on people, and the reliable ones he used for hypnosis therapy. And the immediate results startle people.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

And here I thought you were just a grandpa writin’ stories and hangin’ on a porn site.

LIT is my laboratory, and many are my rats and guinea pigs

How yuh doin, dripstick?

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