Pet's Holliday

[Guest]

I just completed reading the above named story. There was no e-mail link to the author "pet". The story its self was not bad but there were almost no Capitals used and the sentance structure left a lot to be desired. Mid way through the story she changed as to which gender was in charge and who got the Caps .... I was very dissappointed that this story even got posted in its current condition...Would like to hear from anyone else who has read the story.

 

[KillerMuffin]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=36661

I'm rather picky about what I read. I didn't get very far into it before the utter disrespect for mechanics had me backclicking. I couldn't venture to talk about the content of it, though.

How was the story itself? Beyond the lack of capitalization?

 

[Debbie]

The story itself was quite good. The content was interesting for those who enjoy Master/pet stories.

I found the lack of capitals distracting.

I have sent pet feedback and hope that I hear back.