Paragraph help?

[Tony_Stark]

Good Morning!

I submitted a story a week or so ago and found out this morning that it was rejected for "editing" reasons. From what I can gather, I don't have the paragraphs broken down right. Any editor's in here that could help me with "adjusting" it to get it approved?

Thanks for any consideration!

Tony

 

[PacoFear]

How many words is it?

 

[Tony_Stark]

4,729 (8 Pages)

 

[PacoFear]

Just PM'ed you. I'll take a shot if you want.

 

[PacoFear]

FYI- finished and returned to author.