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Okay, I've been away for a while, but now I'm back and I've submitted the second chapter of Sweet Maggie. Please go over and take a look. Votes and honest feedback are always appreciated. I am particularly appreciative of constructive criticism that will help me to improve my writing.
Thanks!!!!
LaJovena
Also, I don't know why the font changes back and forth. I submitted it as a Word document because I used italics, and that's what we got back. I guess in the future, I'll just submit straight text in the submit box.
Okay, I've been away for a while, but now I'm back and I've submitted the second chapter of Sweet Maggie. Please go over and take a look. Votes and honest feedback are always appreciated. I am particularly appreciative of constructive criticism that will help me to improve my writing.
Thanks!!!!
LaJovena
Also, I don't know why the font changes back and forth. I submitted it as a Word document because I used italics, and that's what we got back. I guess in the future, I'll just submit straight text in the submit box.
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