"On the Job" Story Event 2025

[AllenWoody]

I’m happy to say mine came out yesterday as scheduled and has been kindly received so far

https://www.literotica.com/s/doctor-patient-privileges

Yes! I read that and enjoyed it, though for a while I thought it had been mis-categorized. Well done.

 

[AllenWoody]

I haven’t read everyone’s submissions yet, but some of these are very well done.
Given that these are all free posts on a free website the quality seems very high. Congratulations to everyone who put in the hard work to share a story!

Great start in non-con Bryan!

 

[LoquiSordidaAdMe]

Ok, I give up. I just can't come up with a better title. Usually, I have the title first and I write the story to it. In this case, my title was the narrator's catch phrase--a refrain repeated through out the text; a leitmotif, if you'll forgive the pretentiousness.

But my beta readers pointed out (quite correctly) that the repetition made my narrator seem whiny and entitled. So that particular darling had to die, taking my title along with it.

I came up with a perfectly serviceable, if somewhat utilitarian, title but it never really sang to me the way the original did. I was hoping to come up with something better before the deadline, but I've failed. The second best idea I had was a drunken alliteration overkill that made me cringe when sober.

So I just now pulled the trigger and submitted A Doctor's Office Dalliance. What are the odds that the perfect title comes to me in the next 24 hours?

 

[Actingup]

Ok, I give up. I just can't come up with a better title. Usually, I have the title first and I write the story to it. In this case, my title was the narrator's catch phrase--a refrain repeated through out the text; a leitmotif, if you'll forgive the pretentiousness.

But my beta readers pointed out (quite correctly) that the repetition made my narrator seem whiny and entitled. So that particular darling had to die, taking my title along with it.

I came up with a perfectly serviceable, if somewhat utilitarian, title but it never really sang to me the way the original did. I was hoping to come up with something better before the deadline, but I've failed. The second best idea I had was a drunken alliteration overkill that made me cringe when sober.

So I just now pulled the trigger and submitted A Doctor's Office Dalliance. What are the odds that the perfect title comes to me in the next 24 hours?

I'm all agog to find out if it's a dalliance in a doctor's office (possibly not involving the doctor), or if a doctor has gone to somebody else's office to dally!

 

[LoquiSordidaAdMe]

I'm all agog to find out if it's a dalliance in a doctor's office (possibly not involving the doctor), or if a doctor has gone to somebody else's office to dally!

See? My title is already causing confusion and uncertainty. Not a good sign. ;-)

 

[Actingup]

See? My title is already causing confusion and uncertainty. Not a good sign. ;-)

Or, it's promoting engagement. Also, if you could get a Mills & Boon novel into said office with that exact title, I think you'd score extra points.

 

[PennyThompson]

Thanks.
[rant]
It would be very nice if dumb ass people would speak in understandable language instead of acronyms and not assume old farts know what they are talking about. But I guess that's the new language huh? Pretty soon we're gunna be back to hieroglyphs and pictograms.
[/rant]

Comshaw

But Mr. Comshaw, your faux-HMTL /rant tag is a modern linguistic affectation that only makes sense to someone who is Very Online

 

[Actingup]

I slipped in a short extra story yesterday, and it has just been published. "After Her Workmate's Funeral" is non-erotic and contains very little humour. As the title suggests, it's an office worker trying to organise her thoughts and feelings, sitting at her desk next to her workmate's empty chair, after attending his funeral. She writes him an email, knowing that she will be the one delegated by her boss to answer his emails. Grim for this site, and contains references to suicide and depression. If I haven't put you off completely, I'd welcome any comments on it.

 

[TheLobster]

But Mr. Comshaw, your faux-HMTL /rant tag is a modern linguistic affectation that only makes sense to someone who is Very Online

It's BBCode, exclusive to the forums of yore circa 2000s and early 2010s. In internet terms and time scales, that's not modern by any stretch!

 

[Comshaw]

But Mr. Comshaw, your faux-HMTL /rant tag is a modern linguistic affectation that only makes sense to someone who is Very Online

Sass! So that's what I get for an oldman grump, sass! Looky here Missy, you just behave yourself now!

It's BBCode, exclusive to the forums of yore circa 2000s and early 2010s. In internet terms and time scales, that's not modern by any stretch!

Yep, ancient in Interweb time scales. I suppose I could have used: 01010010 01000001 01001110 01010100 and 01010010 01000001 01001110 01010100 01001111 01000110 01000110. But that's way too much work for a FOM.


Comshaw

 

[Comshaw]

So far I have one comment on my story.
"While the sex scenes were good, Sharon was a pretty despicable character and I hated to see it end with good things for her. Given her feelings of superiority and need to punish people, no wonder her boyfriend dumped her. Lack of any repercussions for her actions brings down the satisfaction of the story."

Logan and Grace gave Sharon a carrot (really great sex) which she accepted, enjoyed and decided she wanted more of. They also issued a warning, "don't fuck with us or our friends and the carrot will always be here for you". The unspoken part of that was they had a stick, a big one, but wouldn't use it unless they had to.

Referring to LC's thread on "Testing reader's Morality", it's interesting to me that this reader thinks that punishment is a lot better (and a primary go-to) than a carrot to try to change a behavior. In my life, I tend to use the carrot first as in "here, enjoy and if you like it you can have more if you change your behavior", reserving the punishment for when the carrot doesn't work. Others, like the reader who commented, tend to go right to the stick believing that's the best way to change behavior or because for some it's a satisfying feeling to make others suffer for their transgressions. From personal experience I can say the stick isn't going to make some change what they do. Some will, but there will always be a few who defy any treatment like that. Beat them to the ground and they will snarl and bite you on the ankle. On the flip side there will always be some who take the offered carrot, laugh and do what they were doing anyway. But I beleive that trying the carrot first is the best way. And I have never relished nor enjoyed punishing someone, even if they deserve it.

Comshaw

 

[Dreoilin]

Just to check, the deadline is 00.00 April 25th EST?

 

[Belegon]

Okay, So I submitted Blowing The Bus Driver. It's in the mature category and honestly was hard to write for the reasons I mentioned before. the age gap part of the story doesn' t bother me but the idea of getting in any wat sexually involved with A Student? That was hard even to write. certainly would never agree to any such thing in real life. indeed, this could have gone in Reluctance/Non-Consent. but I think I have other ideas in that category and this is the first time I've ever submitted anything in Mature as well.

I'm thinking of doing a Pirate story next. Calico Jack, Anne Bonny and Mary Reade.

 

[Izanami9]

I slipped in a short extra story yesterday, and it has just been published. "After Her Workmate's Funeral" is non-erotic and contains very little humour. As the title suggests, it's an office worker trying to organise her thoughts and feelings, sitting at her desk next to her workmate's empty chair, after attending his funeral. She writes him an email, knowing that she will be the one delegated by her boss to answer his emails. Grim for this site, and contains references to suicide and depression. If I haven't put you off completely, I'd welcome any comments on it.

I just read it, and after nearly drowning from the flash flood you caused during my lunch break, left a longish comment. Just wanted to reiterate my thanks here as well. It’s beautifully done, and not only in terms of writing quality.

 

[Actingup]

I just read it, and after nearly drowning from the flash flood you caused during my lunch break, left a longish comment. Just wanted to reiterate my thanks here as well. It’s beautifully done, and not only in terms of writing quality.

Thank you so much, Izanami - I really appreciate that. I’ll look forward to reading your comment after it comes through the system.

I’m sorry about the flash flood!!

 

[LoquiSordidaAdMe]

Mine is up.

https://www.literotica.com/s/a-doctors-office-dalliance
A lonely Desi-American girl falls for a Black truck driver.

I'm looking forward to the full list of stories.

 

[Nice_old_guy]

Well. better late than never, I have submitted something. Don't know if it will go live before the competition, but it was the reason for writing and submitting it, so for encouraging new content, this worked for me.
Hopefully, some will read it, and some will offer constructive criticism, and if it isn't hated, then I will write some more.
I will start reading all of the submissions over the weekend.

 

[SouthernCrossfire]

Congrats to all who had better time management skills than me and actually got their stories completed and published. Also, good luck to anyone still trying to meet today's deadline.

I made progress but my two stories, one an "OtJ" sequel, the other all new, will be delayed until next year.

 

[Dat_Dere]

"On the Job" 2025

It's one of the most common fantasies in the world. You see someone sharply dressed, diligently performing a task with the utmost professionalism. Maybe it's your boss or co-worker. Or maybe it's the person serving you.

But of course, sex is always in the back of your mind.

With "On the Job," right here on Literotica, those themes will be explored in all their beautiful glory.

Because who doesn't desire sex in the workplace?

Guidelines:

- The ENTIRE story must happen at a place of employment
- At least one character must be an employee
- Doesn't have to be one scene. Make as many scenes as you want.
- Examples include; a retail business, a professor at college, an airline employee at the airport or airplane, a hotel attendant, and of course an office worker. etc...

Date:

The posting period is between April 18 - April 24

Final list to be posted on April 25, Friday

Posting Info:

Use "OnTheJob" in your Notes section when submitting.

Expand your creativity.

I noticed that one set of rules said add ON THE JOB 2025to the notes, and another set of rules said OnTheJob. Does it matter which one we used? I just published a story and I wasn't expecting it to go up until tomorrow because it was supposed to be part of the on the job event. It doesn't appear to have any indicators it was related to on the on the job event. Now I'm wondering if I used the wrong phrase in the notes.

https://www.literotica.com/s/intern-4

 

[HeyAll]

I noticed that one set of rules said add ON THE JOB 2025to the notes, and another set of rules said OnTheJob. Does it matter which one we used? I just published a story and I wasn't expecting it to go up until tomorrow because it was supposed to be part of the on the job event. It doesn't appear to have any indicators it was related to on the on the job event. Now I'm wondering if I used the wrong phrase in the notes.

https://www.literotica.com/s/intern-4

No it doesn't matter, thank you for joining

 

[sinfantasy]

on-the-job-story-challenge-2025-the-stories The list is out with 48 stories submitted for the event.

 

[Nice_old_guy]

Unfortunately mine was too late to make it. I'll post a link to it here when it gets published.

 

[TheLobster]

on-the-job-story-challenge-2025-the-stories The list is out with 48 stories submitted for the event.

One user seems to have done the work of compiling a list of all the stories, which should be easier to peruse because you can see the descriptions and categories there.

 

[sinfantasy]

Unfortunately mine was too late to make it. I'll post a link to it here when it gets published.

@Nice_old_guy This is not a contest. I believe your story would still make it in the list when it gets published. If not, just send a polite PM to Laurel and request her to add it in the list.

 

[Nice_old_guy]

@Nice_old_guy This is not a contest. I believe your story would still make it in the list when it gets published. If not, just send a polite PM to Laurel and request her to add it in the list.

It just got published, refreshed the list and it's on there. I hope someone likes it, as I've read loads of good stuff on here.