Older sister x Younger brother story ideas! I have a storyline idea but i have no idea how to write script dialogue, so here's the quick synopsis.

[KarlKronnen]

Inspired by
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-things-you-make-me-feel-ch-01 by blackmatter

**Title: Finding Home**

**Prologue: The Departure**

Five years ago, Ethan Davis made a decision that would change the course of his life forever. Disillusioned with college and feeling a deep sense of unease about his future, he made the bold choice to enlist in the military, leaving behind his family and everything he knew in search of purpose and meaning.

**Chapter 1: The Return**

As Ethan stands outside the familiar gates of his family's residence, he feels a sense of trepidation mingled with excitement. After years of being away, he is finally returning home, guided by a metal compass etched with the word "Home" and a picture of his sister, Emily.

**Chapter 2: Reunion**

Ethan's return is met with a mixture of joy and disbelief as his family gathers to welcome him back. His brother David is the first to greet him, pulling him into a tight embrace as tears of happiness stream down his face. As Ethan makes his way through the crowded house, he catches sight of Emily, her eyes widening in disbelief as she takes in the sight of her long-lost brother.

**Chapter 3: Rediscovering Identity**

In the days that follow, Ethan begins the process of reconnecting with his family and friends, piecing together fragments of his past and rediscovering his true identity. With each passing day, he grows closer to Emily, their bond strengthening with each shared moment.

**Chapter 4: Uncovering Secrets**

As Ethan delves deeper into his past, he uncovers hidden truths and long-buried secrets that threaten to unravel the fragile fabric of his newfound happiness. He discovers that he was not just a soldier, but a covert operative, tasked with carrying out dangerous missions in the shadows.

**Chapter 5: Love Found**

Despite the obstacles they face, Ethan and Emily's love blossoms, transcending the boundaries of time and space. As they navigate the challenges of their forbidden relationship, they find solace and strength in each other's arms, determined to overcome whatever obstacles stand in their way.

**Chapter 6: Family Dynamics**

The dynamic within the Davis family shifts as Ethan's return forces them to confront long-buried tensions and resentments. Jason, their oldest sibling, reacts with anger and disapproval upon learning of Ethan and Emily's relationship, while their parents struggle to come to terms with the truth of their children's feelings.

**Chapter 7: Facing Challenges**

As Ethan and Emily stand united against the forces that seek to tear them apart, they face a series of challenges that put their love to the test. From external pressures to internal doubts and insecurities, they must confront their deepest fears and vulnerabilities in order to emerge stronger and more united than ever before.

**Chapter 8: Acceptance**

Despite the initial disapproval of their families, Ethan and Emily's love ultimately prevails, as their parents and siblings come to accept the truth of their feelings. Through tears and heartache, they learn to let go of their preconceived notions and embrace the love that binds them together, knowing that as long as they have each other, they can weather any storm.

**Chapter 9: A New Beginning**

Years pass, and Ethan and Emily build a life together filled with love, laughter, and joy. They overcome every obstacle that comes their way, their bond growing stronger with each passing day. And when Emily gives birth to their first child, a daughter with Ethan's blue eyes and Emily's radiant smile, they know that their love has come full circle, creating a new beginning for their own little family.

**Epilogue: Forever Home**

As Ethan and Emily look back on their journey, they realize that the true meaning of home lies not in a place, but in the hearts of those we love. Through every trial and tribulation, they have found their way back to each other, proving that love truly is the greatest force in the universe.

And as they stand together, hand in hand, watching the sunset from the porch of their family home, they know that they have finally found their forever home in each other's arms.

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[Rob_Royale]

Script dialogue is just brief descriptors that open or close the dialogue and is very easy if you just imagine the scene.

Margo walked into the room looking bedraggled. She set her purse down roughly on the coffee table, and looked at her boyfriend in his chair.

"I have had a really lousy day," she said with a heavy sigh. "The Wilson account got all screwed up and Nancy quit on me and ... nothing went fucking right, all day."

Mike smiled from his chair and held up his hand. He set aside his tablet and rose. He was wearing a lose bathrobe and she could see his hair was still damp from the shower. He opened the robe and let it fall from his shoulders.

Margo sighed again as she took in her lover's naked body. "Although things are looking up now," she thought.

Mike reached down to the side table and lifted a glass and handed it to her. "Chrissy called and told me you were having a rough one, so I came home early."

Margo took a sip from the big glass. "Oh, you do make the best margaritas," she said as she laid her other hand on his chest.

"Lets go upstairs," he said. "I have the table all ready, and I will massage your bad day away."

She smiled and she felt a little tension slip from her body. She batted her eyes at him. "Will you do that thing that I love so much?"

Mike nodded. "Until you are utterly spent and ready for bed."

Margo sighed again and admired her young lovers trim body, to include his impressive cock that was beginning to come to life at the mere thought of touching her.

"I may have to marry this one," she thought with a happy sigh.

Writing dialogue IS TELLING the story. It's how we come to know the characters and how they feel. You can describe them and their backstories until doomsday, but we won't know them until they speak and interact with others. We won't care about them, because they aren't people yet. It's the most enjoyable part of the story for me. I just put myself in the center of the room and describe what happens around me.

But like anything, it requires practice. Just write it.

 

[KarlKronnen]

Script dialogue is just brief descriptors that open or close the dialogue and is very easy if you just imagine the scene.

Margo walked into the room looking bedraggled. She set her purse down roughly on the coffee table, and looked at her boyfriend in his chair.

"I have had a really lousy day," she said with a heavy sigh. "The Wilson account got all screwed up and Nancy quit on me and ... nothing went fucking right, all day."

Mike smiled from his chair and held up his hand. He set aside his tablet and rose. He was wearing a lose bathrobe and she could see his hair was still damp from the shower. He opened the robe and let it fall from his shoulders.

Margo sighed again as she took in her lover's naked body. "Although things are looking up now," she thought.

Mike reached down to the side table and lifted a glass and handed it to her. "Chrissy called and told me you were having a rough one, so I came home early."

Margo took a sip from the big glass. "Oh, you do make the best margaritas," she said as she laid her other hand on his chest.

"Lets go upstairs," he said. "I have the table all ready, and I will massage your bad day away."

She smiled and she felt a little tension slip from her body. She batted her eyes at him. "Will you do that thing that I love so much?"

Mike nodded. "Until you are utterly spent and ready for bed."

Margo sighed again and admired her young lovers trim body, to include his impressive cock that was beginning to come to life at the mere thought of touching her.

"I may have to marry this one," she thought with a happy sigh.

Writing dialogue IS TELLING the story. It's how we come to know the characters and how they feel. You can describe them and their backstories until doomsday, but we won't know them until they speak and interact with others. We won't care about them, because they aren't people yet. It's the most enjoyable part of the story for me. I just put myself in the center of the room and describe what happens around me.

But like anything, it requires practice. Just write it.

I really wish I could but I don't think I have enough free time to write it. So I'm just hoping if any authors is interested to pick this up, but thanks for the tips .

 

[Yarglenurp]

There's something someone once said on here that resonates with me... no one will like your ideas as much as you. If you like it, you should just write it and see what happens.

Also, was this whole thing just inspired by that one Folgers commercial?

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

I really wish I could but I don't think I have enough free time to write it. So I'm just hoping if any authors is interested to pick this up, but thanks for the tips .

So I haven’t written a published story in quite sometime (and I torched that account) but here’s what’s been helping my RP posts: I use my phone. I open up a notes app and then type a little bit here and there throughout the day.

The big reason I would push you to write your own story is that:

1. It can be quite a thrilling experience.
2. Everybody has to start somewhere and the only way ti get better at writing is to write.
3. No one will be able to capture your idea the way you envision it other than yourself and since you’ve planned it out so much another writer would feel constrained…so unless you’re commissioning it to be written, I don’t think it would go the way you’d want.

For example: Silkstockingslover used a couple of my ideas (with permission of course) for her stories (“man of the house” for example used a prompt from my old account) but in those cases they were just prompts, effectively “hey wouldn’t it be fun if someone used this element?” So she took said idea and made it her own thing

But I also once mapped out an idea and someone made a pitch to me for how they would write it and it felt wrong. But again, I had posted it in ideas so they weren’t wrong in assuming it was up for grabs. I should have just written the damn idea and not gotten so attached to something that was barely in the brainstorming stage.

So if you have a vision for a story: I say go for it.

 

[KarlKronnen]

So I haven’t written a published story in quite sometime (and I torched that account) but here’s what’s been helping my RP posts: I use my phone. I open up a notes app and then type a little bit here and there throughout the day.

The big reason I would push you to write your own story is that:

1. It can be quite a thrilling experience.
2. Everybody has to start somewhere and the only way ti get better at writing is to write.
3. No one will be able to capture your idea the way you envision it other than yourself and since you’ve planned it out so much another writer would feel constrained…so unless you’re commissioning it to be written, I don’t think it would go the way you’d want.

For example: Silkstockingslover used a couple of my ideas (with permission of course) for her stories (“man of the house” for example used a prompt from my old account) but in those cases they were just prompts, effectively “hey wouldn’t it be fun if someone used this element?” So she took said idea and made it her own thing

But I also once mapped out an idea and someone made a pitch to me for how they would write it and it felt wrong. But again, I had posted it in ideas so they weren’t wrong in assuming it was up for grabs. I should have just written the damn idea and not gotten so attached to something that was barely in the brainstorming stage.

So if you have a vision for a story: I say go for it.

You got a point there abt writing my own story, and I'll keep that in mind. Thx for the advice.

 

[KarlKronnen]

There's something someone once said on here that resonates with me... no one will like your ideas as much as you. If you like it, you should just write it and see what happens.

Also, was this whole thing just inspired by that one Folgers commercial?

No lol, it was inspired by blackmatter's series The Things You Makes Me Feel If u haven't read that i suggest u do, bcs it's one of the few rare bro/sis series that IMO is beyond Literotica. I tried to look for another series like that but never quite found one, the closest i got is Wilderwood by Scorpio_Six, and another one but infinished story Island Of Truth & Consequences.