Recently read Dark Pulse's "Going Feet First" series and was hooked from the onset so I figured I'd dust off my brain and pick my writing back up again. I've been writing fantasy short stories for a few years and have been working on a novel off and on for years but never something that could be classified as erotica. As a nod to Dark Pulse, my story is a similar sci-fi/fantasy blend but using a modern soldier and a fantasy world that a few are familiar with: Forgotten Realms. Thought I'd get some feedback from other authors who have read works like Salvatore and Cunningham's (been told my writing is similar) and see if it'd be something they'd be interested in. Pointers and other author reviews of my work are also appreciated. Thanks in advance.