Office Morale story is up

Zingiber

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Office Morale

After a bit of a wait (thank you all for the comforting words), my story Office Morale has been approved.

I have enough threads up to give you an idea of the story, and plans for a couple more to flesh out the "roots" of the story tree.

Give it a look. If you get a bright idea, try it out.

Here it is: Office Morale

-- Zingiber

P.S.: Here's the synopsis and guidelines:

Synopsis: Home office investigates sexy morale-boosting plan
Category: Swingers
Non-immersive, 3rd person M and F PoV.

[Guidelines]
Office policy is safe sex -- nobody wants to risk a job like this by openly breaking this rule. Otherwise, pretty much consensual sex in any combination of men and/or women together or separately. My starting threads focus on Helen and Rick, but there are other characters you could follow.

Your threads don't need to be as long or as chatty
as mine. :)

Named Characters (updated 2002-Sep-30):

Rick Hart -- visiting from company HQ
Helen Giles -- local manager, "knows" Rick biblically
Andrew -- Helen's new husband, helped design policy.
Patty -- pale, tall brunette receptionist
Ayanna Washington -- buxom security officer
Stan Washington -- facilities, Ayanna's husband
Aurora ("Rory") Mishkin -- safety specialist
Penny Chang -- athletic young woman of Chinese descent

The Sales Team (in order around the circle, best guess :) ):

Dan -- sales lead, takes break in a circle with his team
David -- salesman
Kacey -- tall stylish brunette, top in sales
Darren -- tall, handsome black salesman
Andy -- bearded salesman
Annabel -- black, enjoys herself loudly, lowest in sales
Ken -- dark-haired salesman
Malcolm -- balding fellow, no finesse with women
Philip -- young salesman, working on self-control
Kimberly -- blonde, cheerful, team spirit
Warren -- middle-aged salesman
 
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I'd like to thank AaronWebster for his stirring contribution! :cool:

After Rick tours the office, he steps up to watch the sales team
reward their best seller in a very special way.

-Z
 
suggestions welcome as well as threads

If you have an idea or thought for Office Morale, but you're not up to contributing a thread, I'm open to suggestions for scenes, character details, or directions to develop it; or for "set-ups" that you or others could build on.

Credit gratefully given to ideas that go into the story.

Thanks,

-Z. :cathappy:
 
more characters (thanks AW!)

The sales team has their own little thing going in AaronWebster's
thread, where cooperation and competition go hand in hand, so to speak.

Here they are ...

(revised 30-Sept-2002 for AW's latest!)

The Sales Team (in order around the circle, best guess :) ):

Dan -- sales lead, takes break in a circle with his team
David -- salesman
Kacey -- tall stylish brunette, top in sales
Darren -- tall, handsome black salesman
Andy -- bearded salesman
Annabel -- black, enjoys herself loudly, lowest in sales
Ken -- dark-haired salesman
Malcolm -- balding fellow, no finesse with women
Philip -- young salesman, working on self-control
Kimberly -- blonde, cheerful, team spirit
Warren -- middle-aged salesman

Thanks AW!

(btw...how do I get the thread ID so I can post a link?)
 
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AaronWebster's distinguished style is represented again with a follow-up to his thread on Kacey's fantasy fulfillment reward for top sales, in which we learn that the balding fellow's name is Malcolm, and that Kacey enjoys taking her clothes off to music.

And that's just to start.


Thanks AW!

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=870&next_id=6817

-Z.
 
AaronWebster's latest action-filled thread!

Rick and Helen leave to continue their tour. Annabel participates as Kacey connects with all the fellows on the sales team (all named!):

But what will Kimberly do?

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=870&next_id=6919

----

Lilguy, Chyoo's most enthusiastic contributor, gets Rick in deeper as he goes along with Tamara's proposition so Penny can watch. It feels good, but what will Helen think?

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=870&next_id=6830
 
Thread Map (experiment)

I'm trying an experiment -- a map of all the threads in Office Morale. Not too many now, but I shudder at trying to map it if it grows to be something like dacia's or ooohkitty's wonderfully deep stories. :)

If people hate it, I can scrub it out. If people like it, I can try to maintain it. (I think Chyoo should do something like this automatically).

Thread Map for Office Morale
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=870

Introduction (Zingiber, 5956)
What does Rick want to do?
|
|-Briefing (Zingiber, 6382)
| Time for a demonstration, or run along?
| |
| |-Demonstration (Zingiber, 6383)
| | What do they do?
| | |
| | |-Take it Off, Helen (lilguy , 6578)
| | | What happens now?
| | |
| | |-Rick and Helen show off for Patty (Zingiber, 7644)
| | | What does Rick want to do?
|
|-Office Tour (Zingiber, 6384)
| On to the break room, or join the sales team huddle?
| |
| |-Join the Sales Team (AaronWebster, 6475)
| | What?
| | |
| | |-Gang Bang (lilguy , 6670)
| | | does Rick join in?
| | |
| | |-To be a stripper (AaronWebster, 6817)
| | | Well?
| | | |
| | | |-Rick goes, switch to Annabel's PoV (AaronWebster, 6919)
| | | | How can they include Kimberly?
| | | | |
| | | | |-Darren's big gay idea (AaronWebster, 7140)
| | | | | Which washroom should Annabel choose?
| | | | | |
| | | | | |-Women's (AaronWebster, 7796)
| | | | | | Who emerges?
| | | | | | |
| | | | | | |-Aurora Mishkin (AaronWebster, 7938)
| | | | | | | What does Rory suggest?
| | |
| | |-A daisy chain (Zingiber, 7137)
| | | Who's with Ken between Helen and Kacey?
| | | |
| | | |-Rick's in, between Kacey and Ken (Zingiber, 7243)
| | | | Can Rick hold on?
| | |
| |-On to the break room...almost (Zingiber, 6556)
| | Who goes to meet Andrew (or start Andrew's PoV)?
| | |
| | |-Don't worry, send Patty (Zingiber, 6557)
| | | Will Rick accept an invitation, wait for Helen, or...
| | | |
| | | |-meet Tamara (lilguy , 6614)
| | | | does he accept
| | | | |
| | | | |-Mr. Rick's wild ride (lilguy , 6830)
| | | | | what happens
| | | |
| | | |-Helen comes (lilguy , 6759)
| | | | what do they do
| | | | |
| | | | |-Chat and watch Ayanna (Zingiber, 6780)
| | | | | Where next for Helen and Rick?
| | | | | |
| | | | | |-Bathroom (lilguy, 7690)
| | | | | | Who do they watch or join?
| | | |
| | | |-meet Penny (lilguy , 7181)
| | | | Does someone come? Which hole does he put it in?
| | |
| | |-Let's go meet him (Zingiber, 7021)
| | | What's unusual about Andrew?
|
|-Wait, Helen has a debriefing! (Zingiber, 6937)
| Does Rick come along?
|
|-Hold on, let's... (Zingiber, 7023)
| How does Rick want to start his office visit?
 
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just a question

call me stupid

how does that thread map work

luv,
Christy
 
Well, it's supposed to look like the spreading branches, or whatever, of the story tree.

Various people (myself included) have complained about it being hard to find new threads in a large story, so this is supposed to be the whole story's threads on one page. Kind of like the "Windows Explorer" with all the directories expanded out.

But I can see how it might be hard to read.

Each thread is two lines, the first being the choice you use to get there, then the question at the end.

The thread titles are links to take you to the thread under that named choice. The number by each is the thread number. In case the link is broken, you can still find it by plugging in story ID and thread number. It also tells you which threads are latest, even if they are back near the start of the story. I've also linked the author's name to their Chyoo "about" page.

Vertical lines are supposed to connect the options for a given thread's questions.

The further across the page a thread is, the deeper into the story it is.

Here's a shorter example, in case it might make more sense:


Thread Map for Jack and Jill

Introduction
Do they go up the hill?
|
|-No, sleep in.
| What happens then?
|
|-Yes, to fetch a pail of water
| Does Jack fall down?
| |
| |-He breaks his crown!
| | What does Jill do?
| | |
| | |-She comes tumbling after.
| | | Is Jill OK?
| |
| |-No, Jack just slips.
| | Does Jill fall down?
 
thanks thanks thanks

okay thanks
not sure im gonna give that a try
but maybe

luv,
christy:kiss:
 
AaronWebster offers a satisfying, explosive conclusion to Kacey's sales award meeting, AND keeps the plot rolling, following our current point-of-view character Annabel, as she schemes to get her sales figures up...and/or get some quiet revenge for a rude interruption!

A sterling effort, sir! Let it be a challenge to the rest of us!

Darren's big gay idea (AaronWebster, 7140)

I have also added it the the "thread map" elsewhere in this Literotica discussion thread.

Everybody rate it 5, OK?

- Z
 
Things get more heated in the briefing room, as Helen demonstrates her oral technique on Rick for Patty.

Rick and Helen show off for Patty (Zingiber, 7644)

But it comes out that Helen has kissed and told on Rick? Will he go along with acting out his secret fantasy, or just get a nice little quickie in the briefing room with Helen and Patty?
 
After Helen and Rick watch Ayanna in the break room, she decides to have him meet some more people nearby. Where?

Bathroom

where there's quite a bit going on. Thanks Lilguy!

-Z
 
Continuing Annabel's wash-up with the girls, who emerges from the closed bathroom stall they neglected?

It's Aurora Mishkin

Rory Mishkin reveals that she's been rather enjoying keeping a lustful ear on them, but as safety specialist, she may be forced to give them a formal warning for misbehavior around the safe sex rules.

Unless they agree to an alternative...

Thanks again for keeping the fire burning, AaronWebster!

-- Zingiber
 
Triple

There is triplication in "Julie's Submission", under the category Cheating Wives, the "try to get better pictures thread" on the first page.
 
My mistake

I dropped that last reply in on the wrong thread.

Hope fully that won't confuse anyone. It was supposed to be under the site section.

Sorry.
 
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