..now seeking a beta reader(s)

[DimensionOfDesire]

Thanks to Sexnovella for doing a good edit on my short story and providing a number of mechanical edit corrections and alignment to standard conventions. I had tried posting the story but it was initially rejected due to non-conforming dialog formatting, which I think I've also rectified. Still a novice at writing erotica and wanting to post my first story, I'm noticing that the more experienced and wise folk seek out one or more beta readers before posting, so I am interested in gathering such opinion/feedback before hitting the submit button again. It is a coming of age story, first time hetro romance/sex piece based (for the most part) on actual events - about 5K words.

Thanks in advance.

DoD