I don't know if this is appropriate...but here goes. Tell me what you think of this...thanks. By the way, it's written primarily for women.
you've been aroused all day
nipples burning
clit tingling
hard to breathe
but tired of your own touch
so tired
almost exhausted by it
you shower
quick
fast
hot
barely dry
but very wet
lay down on your bed
naked
on your back
legs spread
dragging your fingertips over your body
nipples
breasts
thighs
stomach
everywhere
but never touching your pussy
slow breaths
deep
eyes closed
darkness
finally
you sleep
dream
a man's tongue caressing you
my tongue
high up on the inside of your thighs
you groan
spread your legs further apart
knees bent
deep asleep
minutes pass
my soft touch flowing over your thighs
licking your skin
kissing each tingle
my lips
my mouth
so close
gasping
my touch teasing you
unmercifully
your pussy
so swollen
so tight
so wet
pulsating
begging me quietly
for some touch
any touch
that's it
yes
finally
more of that
you want
more of that
you need
more of that
you're suddenly aware of your clit
just the tip
against my tongue
soft
so soft
gentle
overwhelmingly gentle
stomach muscles tighten
my tongue moves
back and forth
flicking delicately over you
and then suddenly
gone
no touch
hold your breath
groan
want
need
then more kisses
high up on the inside of your thigh
once again
you can breath
small licks
teasing licks
so close
still sleeping
then more kisses
back where you want them
necking with your pussy
my mouth on your crimson lips
wet lips
swollen lips
no tongue
just kissing you softly
relaxing you
deep sleep
almost snoring
dreaming
of my tongue deep inside you
exploring you
warm
so warm
squeezing down around it
thighs trembling
then suddenly
my mouth
my lips
surrounding your clit
sucking
slow
soft
gentle
still unconscious
you roll your hips up
subtle
your body knows what you want
more
sucking slightly harder
until you're completely exposed
inside my mouth
pink
swollen
wildly sensitive
waiting for my tongue
seconds pass
minutes pass
torture
groaning
writhing
finally
ohgawd
ohmygawd
ohyes
yes
back and forth
back and forth
up and down
sliding
circling
gasping
groaning
eyes closed
dreaming
legs jerking
stomach tightening
now with each caress
breathe in
fast
no exhale
ohhhhh
ummmmmm
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
blinding white lights
buzzing pounding in your head
staccato gasps
you can hear your own screams
your first orgasm wakes you
not intense
slow
sensual
waves flowing over your body
caressing your body
your mouth open
wide
eyes still closed
reality or fantasy
a dream that seems so real
too real
now what
another touch
a light kiss
on the edge of your pussy
another
moving up
kisses
tongue dragging
skin tingling
stomach
breasts
surrounding them
covering them
but not everywhere
teasing
finally
a nipple
lips
sucking
tongue caressing
massaging
teeth biting
so lightly that you arch your back
more kisses
your neck
suddenly
your mouth
my mouth on your mouth
flooding you
my teeth biting your lips
your tongue
wild
aroused
exploring
returning each kiss
ohgawddddd
yessssssssss
something new
something wild
something erotic
something so overwhelmingly sensual
the ultimate touch
my cock
pushing down
in
against your soft wet skin
opening you
slowly
too slowly
almost torturing you
one inch
then two
then stop
back an inch
you groan in frustration
beg
finally
in again
deeper
deeper
deeper
until
finally
long deep sexual groan
"ohhh, that feels wonderful, Mark..."
squeeze
squeeze again
eyes closed
savoring
committing to memory the erotic sensations
finally
a woman again
wet
aroused
surrounding a lover's cock
hard
throbbing
twitching
deep inside you
legs wrapped around my warm body
squeeze
squeeze again
relax
arms wrapped around my warm body
squeeze
squeeze again
relax
lips wrapped around my tongue
squeeze
squeeze again
relax
nipples hard
pressing into my chest
tingling
wanting more
growling
neeeding
clit begging
pleading
needing to be touched caressed fondled
you move
sending signals to me
not subtle
you don't care
legs down
knees up
apart
slowly
hands on my butt
pulling my hips back
sliding my cock
out of you
then thru you
over you
inside you
ohhhh yesssssssssss
ohhhh Mark
in and out
slowly
sensually
your hips rocking up
gently
savoring
memorizing
every small critical tingle
in and out
deep inside
completely out
and then
your swollen lips wrapping around the head of my cock
sucking it inside you
pulling it inside you
almost willing it inside you
so deep
deeper
head thrown back
neck exposed
fingers stretched out
like a cat
gasping
groaning
panting
Number Two starts in your toes
making them curl
then your legs
your thighs
sudden trembling
can't control it
your nipples explode
gasping
groaning
panting
jerking
muscles relaxing and contracting wildly
all over your body
slamming your hips up against mine
suddenly you're tied to the tracks
you seeing it coming
screaming
unable to stop it
too late
the train
filled with an almost mystical array of sexual pleasures slams into your body
nothing delicate
nothing soft
nothing subdued
nothing calm
about this orgasm
it grabs you by the ass and jerks your body around like a rag doll
arms flaying
legs jerking
screaming
gasping
literally crying from the intensity
one minute
two minutes
three minutes
finally
exhausted
sweating
tembling
but now you're still
deep breath between kisses
and we roll over
my cock still deep up inside you
until you sleep
laying on top of me
once again
and dream
you've been aroused all day
nipples burning
clit tingling
hard to breathe
but tired of your own touch
so tired
almost exhausted by it
you shower
quick
fast
hot
barely dry
but very wet
lay down on your bed
naked
on your back
legs spread
dragging your fingertips over your body
nipples
breasts
thighs
stomach
everywhere
but never touching your pussy
slow breaths
deep
eyes closed
darkness
finally
you sleep
dream
a man's tongue caressing you
my tongue
high up on the inside of your thighs
you groan
spread your legs further apart
knees bent
deep asleep
minutes pass
my soft touch flowing over your thighs
licking your skin
kissing each tingle
my lips
my mouth
so close
gasping
my touch teasing you
unmercifully
your pussy
so swollen
so tight
so wet
pulsating
begging me quietly
for some touch
any touch
that's it
yes
finally
more of that
you want
more of that
you need
more of that
you're suddenly aware of your clit
just the tip
against my tongue
soft
so soft
gentle
overwhelmingly gentle
stomach muscles tighten
my tongue moves
back and forth
flicking delicately over you
and then suddenly
gone
no touch
hold your breath
groan
want
need
then more kisses
high up on the inside of your thigh
once again
you can breath
small licks
teasing licks
so close
still sleeping
then more kisses
back where you want them
necking with your pussy
my mouth on your crimson lips
wet lips
swollen lips
no tongue
just kissing you softly
relaxing you
deep sleep
almost snoring
dreaming
of my tongue deep inside you
exploring you
warm
so warm
squeezing down around it
thighs trembling
then suddenly
my mouth
my lips
surrounding your clit
sucking
slow
soft
gentle
still unconscious
you roll your hips up
subtle
your body knows what you want
more
sucking slightly harder
until you're completely exposed
inside my mouth
pink
swollen
wildly sensitive
waiting for my tongue
seconds pass
minutes pass
torture
groaning
writhing
finally
ohgawd
ohmygawd
ohyes
yes
back and forth
back and forth
up and down
sliding
circling
gasping
groaning
eyes closed
dreaming
legs jerking
stomach tightening
now with each caress
breathe in
fast
no exhale
ohhhhh
ummmmmm
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
blinding white lights
buzzing pounding in your head
staccato gasps
you can hear your own screams
your first orgasm wakes you
not intense
slow
sensual
waves flowing over your body
caressing your body
your mouth open
wide
eyes still closed
reality or fantasy
a dream that seems so real
too real
now what
another touch
a light kiss
on the edge of your pussy
another
moving up
kisses
tongue dragging
skin tingling
stomach
breasts
surrounding them
covering them
but not everywhere
teasing
finally
a nipple
lips
sucking
tongue caressing
massaging
teeth biting
so lightly that you arch your back
more kisses
your neck
suddenly
your mouth
my mouth on your mouth
flooding you
my teeth biting your lips
your tongue
wild
aroused
exploring
returning each kiss
ohgawddddd
yessssssssss
something new
something wild
something erotic
something so overwhelmingly sensual
the ultimate touch
my cock
pushing down
in
against your soft wet skin
opening you
slowly
too slowly
almost torturing you
one inch
then two
then stop
back an inch
you groan in frustration
beg
finally
in again
deeper
deeper
deeper
until
finally
long deep sexual groan
"ohhh, that feels wonderful, Mark..."
squeeze
squeeze again
eyes closed
savoring
committing to memory the erotic sensations
finally
a woman again
wet
aroused
surrounding a lover's cock
hard
throbbing
twitching
deep inside you
legs wrapped around my warm body
squeeze
squeeze again
relax
arms wrapped around my warm body
squeeze
squeeze again
relax
lips wrapped around my tongue
squeeze
squeeze again
relax
nipples hard
pressing into my chest
tingling
wanting more
growling
neeeding
clit begging
pleading
needing to be touched caressed fondled
you move
sending signals to me
not subtle
you don't care
legs down
knees up
apart
slowly
hands on my butt
pulling my hips back
sliding my cock
out of you
then thru you
over you
inside you
ohhhh yesssssssssss
ohhhh Mark
in and out
slowly
sensually
your hips rocking up
gently
savoring
memorizing
every small critical tingle
in and out
deep inside
completely out
and then
your swollen lips wrapping around the head of my cock
sucking it inside you
pulling it inside you
almost willing it inside you
so deep
deeper
head thrown back
neck exposed
fingers stretched out
like a cat
gasping
groaning
panting
Number Two starts in your toes
making them curl
then your legs
your thighs
sudden trembling
can't control it
your nipples explode
gasping
groaning
panting
jerking
muscles relaxing and contracting wildly
all over your body
slamming your hips up against mine
suddenly you're tied to the tracks
you seeing it coming
screaming
unable to stop it
too late
the train
filled with an almost mystical array of sexual pleasures slams into your body
nothing delicate
nothing soft
nothing subdued
nothing calm
about this orgasm
it grabs you by the ass and jerks your body around like a rag doll
arms flaying
legs jerking
screaming
gasping
literally crying from the intensity
one minute
two minutes
three minutes
finally
exhausted
sweating
tembling
but now you're still
deep breath between kisses
and we roll over
my cock still deep up inside you
until you sleep
laying on top of me
once again
and dream
