Non-sexual erotic writing?

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I have long thought that some of the most deliciously sensual writing out there is not directly concerned with sex at all. I wonder if you might join me in leaving here your own examples of writing which touches the soul and the flesh whilst scarcely touching on sex at all.

To begin with:

“His wedding gift, clasped round my throat. A choker of rubies, two inches wide, like an extraordinarily precious slit throat.”

Angela Carter: from The Bloody Chamber and Other Stories.

"The barge she sat in, like a burnish’d throne,
Burned on the water: the poop was beaten gold;
Purple the sails, and so perfumed that
The winds were lovesick with them; the oars were silver,
Which to the tune of flutes kept stroke, and made
The water which they beat to follow faster,
As amorous of their strokes. For her own person,
It beggar’d all description: she did lie
In her pavilion, cloth-of-gold of tissue,
O’erpicturing that Venus where we see
The fancy outwork nature: on each side her
Stood pretty dimpled boys, like smiling Cupids,
With divers-colour’d fans, whose wind did seem
To glow the delicate cheeks which they did cool,
And what they undid did."

Enobarbus, from Shakespeare's Antony and Cleopatra.

"the night we missed the boat at Algeciras the watchman going about serene with his lamp and O that awful deepdown torrent O and the sea the sea crimson sometimes like fire and the glorious sunsets and the figtrees in the Alameda gardens yes and all the queer little streets and pink and blue and yellow houses and the rosegardens and the jessamine and geraniums and cactuses and Gibraltar as a girl where I was a Flower of the mountain yes when I put the rose in my hair like the Andalusian girls used or shall I wear a red yes"

Part of Molly Bloom's soliloquy, from the end of Ulysses, by James Joyce.

All these have nothing to do with sex per se, though they may touch on it, but each sends that old familiar, animal shiver down my spine. There must be so many other examples. Your thoughts?
 
Read AMoveableBeast's Submissive Gene. I have never been so turned on by a glass of wine that I didn't actually drink.
 
Thank you indeed. Wonderful writing, as you say, though the precise nature of the relationship overall isn't my style. Still, your point about the wine is well taken. Thank you for drawing my attention to it.
 
My thought is that the sensual has everything to do with sex and can't be separated from it. That said, you don't have to have sex just because you're feeling sensual--but sex is still the song you're playing.
 
My thought is that the sensual has everything to do with sex and can't be separated from it. That said, you don't have to have sex just because you're feeling sensual--but sex is still the song you're playing.

Translation, "I got nothing, but needed to post"
 
No, I do see the difference. CS Lewis said something similar in one of his SF novels when a protagonist asked about sex in heaven. The answer was something like sex was not banned, but rather subsumed in an overwhelmingly sensual meta-experience.
 
Wow, PL. Thanks for the nod. Don't know if I deserve to be included with the likes of Angela Carter, Will Shakes, or Joyce, but I am beyond flattered. I'm cyber-blushing, I assure you.
 
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Wow, PL. Thanks for the nod. Don't know if I deserve to be included with the likes of Angela Carter, Will Shakes, or Joyce, but I am beyond flattered. I'm cyber-blushing, I assure you.

I'm just trying to get you to publish that second chapter. ;)
 
I plan to spend all of eternity in Heaven reading the Collected Autobiographies of Hillary Clinton.
 
As objects of erotic euphemism goes, I've always considered steam trains to be perfect.

http://www.american-rails.com/images/Golconda92.jpg


Burning hot fires, pistons moving in and out at ever increasing speed, the rhythmic pounding of the tracks through the wheels, the long hard steel boiler entering the tunnel, the screaming crescendo of the whistle and the brakes as it finally reaches the station....
 
As objects of erotic euphemism goes, I've always considered steam trains to be perfect.

http://www.american-rails.com/images/Golconda92.jpg


Burning hot fires, pistons moving in and out at ever increasing speed, the rhythmic pounding of the tracks through the wheels, the long hard steel boiler entering the tunnel, the screaming crescendo of the whistle and the brakes as it finally reaches the station....

I agree with everything except the braking part. Let's run this fucker off the rails, shall we? ;)
 
It started with Shakespeare, Carter and Joyce, and ended with the Simpson Stock Footage marathon episode.

I'm delighted my humble thread has become a metaphor for Western civilisation so very quickly.
 
"the night we missed the boat at Algeciras the watchman going about serene with his lamp and O that awful deepdown torrent O and the sea the sea crimson sometimes like fire and the glorious sunsets and the figtrees in the Alameda gardens yes and all the queer little streets and pink and blue and yellow houses and the rosegardens and the jessamine and geraniums and cactuses and Gibraltar as a girl where I was a Flower of the mountain yes when I put the rose in my hair like the Andalusian girls used or shall I wear a red yes"

Part of Molly Bloom's soliloquy, from the end of Ulysses, by James Joyce.

I hear this. My inner voice replays the Firesign Theatre reading of the soliloquy. It rings quietly...
 
That sounds wonderful - I'm afraid I missed that rendition. I was lucky enough to see the great Fiona Shaw doing The Wasteland on stage, which was beautiful and terrifying all at once. The version I've linked to is available for iPad.
 
I'm surprised that no one has mentioned William Blake yet.

And some of the ecstatic visions of the monks and nuns of various religions come close to "non-sexual erotic writing."
 
That's true - though some of the nuns' writings qualify as more or less openly pornographic!
 
As objects of erotic euphemism goes, I've always considered steam trains to be perfect.

Burning hot fires, pistons moving in and out at ever increasing speed, the rhythmic pounding of the tracks through the wheels, the long hard steel boiler entering the tunnel, the screaming crescendo of the whistle and the brakes as it finally reaches the station....

Apparently, so did Hitchcock, as in North by Northwest he cuts from this:
http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRPbTLl3_NtTJmnN1L8y7LDsYvbp6q8-6qnGc0zbDXMMIRdGrEx

to this:

http://hisvorpal.files.wordpress.com/2010/09/train-going-into-tunnel.jpg
 
No, I do see the difference. CS Lewis said something similar in one of his SF novels when a protagonist asked about sex in heaven. The answer was something like sex was not banned, but rather subsumed in an overwhelmingly sensual meta-experience.
On the other hand, someone like maybe... Harlan Ellison or someone-- had an angel explain that yes, there is sex in heaven-- The getting it on lasts for aeons and the cumming goes on for years.

*shrug*

I'm with SR on this one. :D
 
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