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Me too!

I'd like to nominate my oldest story...it got the most feedback when it was new, and seemed to generate the most disagreement. No two e-mails seemed to agree about Rayne's motivation, and what happens at the end of the story. She might not even be human. Who knows?

"A Rainy Saturday Night" (Erotic Couplings)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=877

That'll be fun, right?
 
Wow. You mean I can actually ASK for people to discuss something I wrote? Nifty.

I'd like to nominate several of my stories that are only available in Literotica Newletter archives (because not everyone is signed up to receive the newsletters those stories have not been read nearly as much as my others, and I haven't gotten all that many comments on them). But since they're such a pain to access, I think I'll just go ahead and nominate "Jazzy Girl" http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=17 instead.
 
discussion please

I finaly got one that both the wife and I felt was suitable for post.
An earlyer version that would NOT have made the cut here was posted on another site and recieved no feed-back at all.

It was posted (7/7/01)under "Mature" Titled "Senior lovers"

I would like comments.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=18503
 
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Okay. Color me selfish, and this may be the last one I nominate. It's in the non-erotic category. It's called An Acidic Tiger. It's not an easy topic to read, let alone discuss. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=15639

Some interesting points about this that have been pointed out to me.

The characters are not "named" until the very end. Their relationship to each other is not defined. However, when it is, very few people were surprised. I think one was.

It's not erotic, though it is about sex. Would some people find it arousing? Probably. I get infrequent mail telling me that it is in the wrong category.

It's full of sentence fragments that may or may not make it interesting.

I wrote this story in about twenty five minutes and submitted it before I could change my mind. It could be improved grammatically, but would it improve the story? There are many stories, even one of my own, that fantasize about the exact opposite of this one. Is one like this necessary?

It's not an erotic story, it shouldn't be on this site, or so I've been told. How often do people read the non-erotic category? What are they expecting? Should the "genre" of non-erotic stories be a part of the description of the story?

Anyway, these are things that have come across my desk in email.
 
My nomination

Here's one story I have for consideration. I have a couple others I want to have up, but here's one for a start...my first story.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=10831

This one is the intro to my Marilyn series (which I can't post on here in it's entirely due to age restrictions). However, I have enough of it on here, and this story is still well loved. Lemme know what you think, OK?

Brett Lynn
 
I am sorry for duplicating this elsewhere, my mistake

A New Life in Perpetual Orgy


It is in GROUPS but is not confined to group sex covering one on one, solo, FF, FFM, FFFM, FFFFFM, exhibitionism, voyeurism, fetish.
Hey, I like variety!!!

I am putting it up for review simply because I want to know if it hits the mark or misses. Which bits work, which bits don't.

etc etc etc



http://www.literotica.com/stories/s...ry.php?id=20530


Thank you


NemesisGB
 
if you nominate, why not discuss as well

There are lots of people nominating their own stories, but not many who are contributing their opinions on others'.
 
idea

Wouldn't it be beneficial to the amount of crits received on a single story if an author wasn't allowed to nominate his/her own story until he/she has done a specified number of 'meaningful' crits on other author's stories? That just might cut down on how many author's just nominate their stories and then sit back and wait for manna to fall from heaven.

I'm as guilty as the next person for passing a chance to do a crit on another author's work. I get busy, and rational thought isn't possible when I don't have much time to spend on it. Perhaps, if I had to give in order to receive, I'd MAKE the time.

Just a thought.
Mickie
 
Does it matter?

I am not sure it matters much.
If you want feedback on a story here, you should ask for it. There are a lot of people that want feedback that have absolutely no idea how to give it. They either don't see anything wrong, don't want to appear as being mean or just don't understand the thought process of critiquing someones work.

I can not say I am better or worse than others, but I do have a few more minutes than others to review and offer suggestions. Besides, it keeps me away from eroitic writing which is good since i have little to write about as the mind is not working in that area right now.

Just have fun and sooner or later your and my stories will be nominated. Lets just hope that we all get more than the one or two comments that we have been seeing lately (but it is summer after all and who wants to get ALL hot and bothered and wet ---err I mean sweaty.

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Live, love, love some more, then say fuck it and just have RAW SEX. :)
 
Lynn,

I was merely offering a suggestion to up the amount of discussion about stories. And, if someone feels they can't contribute to a disscussion about writing, then what are they doing asking questions about their own work? Anyone who reads or writes has valid opinions. And all anyone has to do is look at the few other thoughts in this circle. A lot of valid points have been made, and that should lead to more thought, not less.

Mickie
 
You may be write

You could be correct, I guess if you write you should be able to critique, you just may not want to and if that is the reason, that I agree, get off your ass and write something, if you don't do it because you don't want to offend anyone, then, get off your ass and write, because afterall I bet I could send your story to SOMEONE who would be offended.

So I guess I agree... Post.
 
Would love it..........

Especially if "this" group would be so kind as to discuss/review and critique one of my stories.

I get considerable feedback from a few writers, mostly readers. But as I believe "this" forum is truly the cream of the crop so to speak, I'd "really" appreciate an honest evaluation of my writing.

Here is a most recent submission. So if this group ever does have time and choses to review this one. I'd love that.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=23301





To sleep.......perchance to dream - William Shakespear
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I remain..........
 
Can I be picky?

Could we have some rules?

Stating the link of course, but also the theme, the category!

I could not do a critique on a story that does not fall within my own interests.

Example: Incest, lesbian, mind control are not of interest to me, therefore I would not read a story like that. Many other categories I would not read.

But I enjoy some Intergalactic ones, which normally I may not look at!

To really be of help, I believe you must do more than just check the grammar, spelling and punctuation.
You must enjoy the story, the theme and want more of it, even if badly written, and then you could criticise politely, constructively and helpfully.

My stories are my own, I like the theme, and I don't expect everyone else to! So I don't read stories that are on a theme that I am not into!

This Forum is good, but...
I think we need some basic rules.
Smiles

Just my few cents worth!

No sense, just cents and past my bed time!


:rolleyes:
 
oops

I forgot to mention the theme, etc.
It is light BDSM, meaning no super-freaky stuff, but BDSM-y enough to hold the attentions of that fetish.
 
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