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[LessThanAWord]

Molly's Obsession

I know Literotica is its own landscape and can appreciate that there are experienced and knowledgeable people to whom my novice attempts might seem naïve or basic. I'd love to hear any thoughts people might have, and get chatting to other writers. Thank you

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Alright, I'm gonna be honest wit you... this isn't normally my brand of story. The way that she tried to steal her mother's boyfriend, and then succeeded... it's not really my thing. Also, anal isn't exactly my favorite. It's okay, and I've included it in a story or two... but I don't normally go out of my way to read it.

That said... wow... this was white hot. I'm not even gonna lie. Very well written... I'm genuinely impressed.

 

[ColinPiper]

This is my kind of territory. And I love the name Molly. And this is very well written. Great job.

 

[Thedeciever69]

I enjoy anal a lot and this was a fantastic story. very Well written. The anal scene was fantastic in its description. I could visualize it as I was reading. certainly made me hard. My only very slight critique would be that I think Adam and Molly’s mom need to have dated for a little longer than a month.

 

[LessThanAWord]

This is all so nice to hear, thank you. I really love that this stirred both people drawn to such stories and people who found turnoffs in the content.

re Adam and Molly's Mom: I had debated the length of their relationship and ultimately landed on it being very short and passionate in order to keep a Forbidden Fruit angle without straying into Implied Incest.