SudoGentleman
Earl of Shrimps
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New Writer First story
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ShadedLady
Virgin
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Yes! You did it and what a fantastic read! I loved the humor! Great job!
ShadedLady
Virgin
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So, I wanted to say this to anyone who is still following this. I think I have writer's block now! I'm really at an odds end about how to continue! I had an idea of where it was going, but I am sort of bent on whether I want to go along with the debauchery I had originally planned, or do I want to turn it into a love story?
SudoGentleman
Earl of Shrimps
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I'm no expert, so don't listen to me... but here's what I'm feeling about your predicament, because I'm feeling it with mine as well.
1. It's easy for me to want to do more, do bigger; but maybe I should just simplify, so that I don't get discouraged and end up stalling out.
2. Write something that I'll enjoy; it's what I did to start, and I'm only really writing for me anyway.
3. I want to continue from the first story, but I feel stress about whether story#2 really measures up to story#1, or isn't "the same". Will people who liked story#1 feel disappointed in story#2? I think I need to get over that. Again, if I write for me, and I accept the link between stories, maybe that's all that matters.
For what its worth, your story was only the tip (just the tip! lol) of the iceberg in the relationship. I wouldn't mind reading a bit more of the debauchery before the relationship turns a corner. But again, that's just me
1. It's easy for me to want to do more, do bigger; but maybe I should just simplify, so that I don't get discouraged and end up stalling out.
2. Write something that I'll enjoy; it's what I did to start, and I'm only really writing for me anyway.
3. I want to continue from the first story, but I feel stress about whether story#2 really measures up to story#1, or isn't "the same". Will people who liked story#1 feel disappointed in story#2? I think I need to get over that. Again, if I write for me, and I accept the link between stories, maybe that's all that matters.
For what its worth, your story was only the tip (just the tip! lol) of the iceberg in the relationship. I wouldn't mind reading a bit more of the debauchery before the relationship turns a corner. But again, that's just me
thomas1965
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Some food for thought.
What is the goal of your MC, revenge, reconciliation or ...?
What action would help to reach or miss the goal ?
Do you want the MC to get what she wants yet ?
What is the goal of your MC, revenge, reconciliation or ...?
What action would help to reach or miss the goal ?
Do you want the MC to get what she wants yet ?
