New Writer First story

I liked it. (I just read it and left a comment)

I know it's fiction, but are parts of it you? The description of the main character?

Anyway I like how the story progressed. And the last portions were climactic indeed
 
I liked it. (I just read it and left a comment)

I know it's fiction, but are parts of it you? The description of the main character?

Anyway I like how the story progressed. And the last portions were climactic indeed
Yes, the main character, Charlotte is me. I appreciate your taking the time to read it and your kind words! Thanks so much!
 
One thing that I don't get is, why do people consistently choose to read a story with a theme that they do not like, then bash the author for writing it.
 
One thing that I don't get is, why do people consistently choose to read a story with a theme that they do not like, then bash the author for writing it.
The mentality of the troll (and your phenomenon is a subclass of such) has been the subject of much speculation. Some will blow past a title like ‘High Heels’ in Fetish, ignore the tags saying High Heels, read a six-page story and then say ‘Good plot, strong characters, hot sex, but I don’t like fetish heels, so ima only giving you a three.” 😳

If you ever figure it out, let us know.
 
Ok, so thank you all for your input! I do appreciate that! I think I will concede for now. While some seem to like the story, some don't like the direction it's going. Maybe I am just too green for that, yet!
 
Do I like writing? Yes, of course, I do! And I will continue to write because I do it for myself! I'm just not sure I care much for those who criticize me for the things I write!
You - we - don’t have to care much for them. It would however be foolish to simply ignore everything but favourable comments. Some, the hostile-on-principle knuckle-draggers and bitchy trolls, can certainly be waved off and bad cess to them. On the other hand, one can learn and improve from judicious criticism.
 
You - we - don’t have to care much for them. It would however be foolish to simply ignore everything but favourable comments. Some, the hostile-on-principle knuckle-draggers and bitchy trolls, can certainly be waved off and bad cess to them. On the other hand, one can learn and improve from judicious criticism.
I agree whole-heartedly with that sentiment. (hmmm ... the word "heartedly" is giving me a red squiggly line beneath it. I thought that was a real word damnit.)

Still, I've yet to receive a negative comment. (Perhaps because I've only posted 1 story to date and its not gotten a lot of views.)
 
My father, in his youth, hung out at a bar in Denver or a suburb called the Shady Lady. It sounds like a strip club, but it wasn't. However, if the stories told by his friends are accurate, my dad had plenty of hot tales he could tell from those days. Your handle, ShadedLady sparked my memory about the bar. ;) again, may the muse and you have many happy hours creating all kinds of fantastic tales.
 
I have been a writer of erotic stories for years, but I never had the nerve to post one until now. My first story is available to read under interracial love. Hope you all enjoy it if you get a chance to read it! Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
I will read it later. Im a big fan of interracial love. Well. Im a big fan of alot of things sexual. But im glad you got the nerve to publish. Im a huge fan of erotica. When i was younger i read alot of penthouse forum. They excited me just as much as seeing the naked pictures.
 
I have been a writer of erotic stories for years, but I never had the nerve to post one until now. My first story is available to read under interracial love. Hope you all enjoy it if you get a chance to read it! Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Congratulations, you did it. Good first effort. I left a comment on your story.
 
My father, in his youth, hung out at a bar in Denver or a suburb called the Shady Lady. It sounds like a strip club, but it wasn't. However, if the stories told by his friends are accurate, my dad had plenty of hot tales he could tell from those days. Your handle, ShadedLady sparked my memory about the bar. ;) again, may the muse and you have many happy hours creating all kinds of fantastic tales.
The name ShadedLady just popped into my head when I was deciding on a handle for here. I am glad it evoked a memory. Thanks for your reply!
 
You - we - don’t have to care much for them. It would however be foolish to simply ignore everything but favourable comments. Some, the hostile-on-principle knuckle-draggers and bitchy trolls, can certainly be waved off and bad cess to them. On the other hand, one can learn and improve from judicious criticism.
I have read a lot of stories from this theme and going back and actually looking at all the comments from those stories, the critics seem to be many. I guess I was just not prepared for all that! Thanks for your input!
 
I will read it later. Im a big fan of interracial love. Well. Im a big fan of alot of things sexual. But im glad you got the nerve to publish. Im a huge fan of erotica. When i was younger i read alot of penthouse forum. They excited me just as much as seeing the naked pictures.
Thanks for your input!
 
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