New story.

[71bruce8]

I wonder too. In the first sentence of your thread you misspelled Fairytat's name and used "i" instead of I'm. In your story there are numerous word ommisions. misspelled words, and punctuation errors. Brief examples. Parag. 1- middle " word "the" missing. Parag. 2 - 2nd last line "has" spelt "as". 3rd-DT&S no commas. 4th - no " for dialogue in last line. 5th - "ill" for "I'll" no period, no" - 4th line etc. Will send you punctuation helper. This story really needs editing. Cannot see how this got approved. Take your time maybe?

 

[solid_]

Maybe the literotica editors where haveing a bad hair day... I'm amazed that it even got approved hope to resubmit in the next few days after some serious editing. .Thanks for your reply 71bruce8, it helps a lot.

 

[Debbie]

I wonder too. In the first sentence of your thread you misspelled Fairytat's name and used "i" instead of I'm. In your story there are numerous word ommisions. misspelled words, and punctuation errors. Brief examples. Parag. 1- middle " word "the" missing. Parag. 2 - 2nd last line "has" spelt "as". 3rd-DT&S no commas. 4th - no " for dialogue in last line. 5th - "ill" for "I'll" no period, no" - 4th line etc. Will send you punctuation helper. This story really needs editing. Cannot see how this got approved. Take your time maybe?

Stories get submitted at lit. Spelling errors or otherwise as long as the story meets the submission criteria of lit.
http://literotica.com/subguide.shtml

 

[KillerMuffin]

What in the heck are you talking about?

 

[71bruce8]

spelling etc.

Right you are debbiexxx. I have yet to finish my first story so had not gotten to the submissions part yet. If you are sensitive to spelling, punctuation etc. the lack of certainly detracts from a story. Literotica provides resources so we should polish up our skills. 71bruce8.

 

[71bruce8]

What are we talking about?

killermuffin. This a detached thread relating to a thread "Feedback needed on new story" by solid. On page near this thread. 71bruce8

 

[p_p_man]

Re: What are we talking about?

killermuffin. This a detached thread relating to a thread "Feedback needed on new story" by solid. On page near this thread. 71bruce8

And if that doesn't confuse you, nothing will!

 

[71bruce8]

Hello

So now London is now in Europe? Wow. Explain?

 

[p_p_man]

Re: Hello

So now London is now in Europe? Wow. Explain?

Tis a long and sorry story I have to tell

But I ain't got the time right now...

I'm actually a firm believer in a United States of Europe or, as one of the posters on the general Board calls it, the New Holy Roman Empire.

Pay us a visit over there sometime. We're a sorry bunch of sarcastic souls...