New story and I would love some feedback

[Ariez]

I am new at writing and would love some feedback on my first story. Any tips would be much appreciated.

Edited: It's in the non-human genre FYI

https://www.literotica.com/s/was-it-truly-just-a-dream

 

[Jada59]

I am new at writing and would love some feedback on my first story. Any tips would be much appreciated.

https://www.literotica.com/s/was-it-truly-just-a-dream

It's well written but you might want to mention the genre. The genre is just not my thing.

 

[Ariez]

Thank you. I'm sorry about that. I made the change in my post. I appreciate it.