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Wednesday...
There are 24 new poems on this early mid-week morning for your enjoyment.
A brief review...
he might have said
by annaswirls
Awarded that elusive 'E', the pacing of this is vigorous and grabbing. Try reading it just once, and you'll find yourself sucked back in for more.
The Geography of Cobblestones
by TheRainMan
snippet...
The streetlights come on, and I’m
alone again. There must be
something here that satisfies
beyond my reckoning. I think
I’ll try a lullaby to lighten
their black blanket, so they know
the weight of my knees.
I enjoyed seeing the evolution of this, and very much enjoy what it's become. The differing images, from fruit women to jackhammers, hits home.
kneel and confess
by maria2394
Go and read this. Simply put.
Topless Under My Sweater
by SaraCrewe
An interesting premise that I had to mention. Some of the phrasing could use some tuning, but overall, clever and original.
Keep your eyes open for Tzara's take on Wednesday's new poems.
Have a great day, y'all.
There are 24 new poems on this early mid-week morning for your enjoyment.
A brief review...
he might have said
by annaswirls
Awarded that elusive 'E', the pacing of this is vigorous and grabbing. Try reading it just once, and you'll find yourself sucked back in for more.
The Geography of Cobblestones
by TheRainMan
snippet...
The streetlights come on, and I’m
alone again. There must be
something here that satisfies
beyond my reckoning. I think
I’ll try a lullaby to lighten
their black blanket, so they know
the weight of my knees.
I enjoyed seeing the evolution of this, and very much enjoy what it's become. The differing images, from fruit women to jackhammers, hits home.
kneel and confess
by maria2394
Go and read this. Simply put.
Topless Under My Sweater
by SaraCrewe
An interesting premise that I had to mention. Some of the phrasing could use some tuning, but overall, clever and original.
Keep your eyes open for Tzara's take on Wednesday's new poems.
Have a great day, y'all.