New member, new story

[erotic_scribbler]

Hi,
I've just joined and posted a story which has just been accepted. I'm afraid it's rather short, but I wanted to see how it would go, before I posted anything more lengthy. I'd really appreciate feedback. Next time I must remember not to prefix the title with 'The'! Anyway, it's in the bdsm category entitled, The Preparation

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=295137

 

[kayandsteve69]

Well written

We enjoyed your story a great deal. We felt you captured your physical response to your nervousness quite well. We have dabbled in some much milder master/slave role play and Kay has experienced a similar nervousness wondering what Steve would come up with next. Unfortunately, we were very turned on by hte time we read your story and wish it had gone further. We look forward to reading the next installment.
Kay and Steve

 

[erotic_scribbler]

Thanks

Thanks so much Kay and Steve. I'll post some more soon. I also have the first chapter of a novel I'm writing, which I could post, but it's much longer