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[pickax]

Here is the link to the story as some of you have asked.

It appears several members who have read it, do not care for it and its context.

Again this is or 1st attempt at writing something of this nature, be kind, would you?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?id=361003

good story line...I am no writer but i enjoyed it ....as long as you think you did a good job how cares what others my say...

 

[petite34c]

Want-a-be sailor

Your picture leaves a lot to be desired. More detail, clearer, seductive are a few items that could have improved it. Only one picture is not much of a start when the picture is of marginal quality to start with. If this is how you want to represent yourself, it shows your marginal character well.
As for the story, after searching for it, (you again left only a title and category to find it), was marred with multiple mis-spellings, bad sentence stucture and excessive use of quote marks. If this is a real life experience, it reflects the theme of over 1000 other stories in the same category only yours is poorly written and lacked editing. I am suprised you got it passed the editor.

If this is all you have to offer, don't bother.

Clearly you have issues....

It's been clear from the start I'm New at this and yet you can not even give a gal a chance, can you?

It appears nobody else has issues with me trying and taking it slow?

I'll bet the most sailing you have done is in your bath tub with a rubber duck!

Do us all a favor and do not hold your breath next time you go under....

 

[Demich]

Hey Pretty Lad, we have no issues, you keep shoeing us all teh shower pictures you like, we love them. Here are a few pictures of us as promised. Hope you enjoy!!!!

 

[Demich]

and another

 

[Demich]

and another!

 

[aniram]

Your picture leaves a lot to be desired. More detail, clearer, seductive are a few items that could have improved it. Only one picture is not much of a start when the picture is of marginal quality to start with. If this is how you want to represent yourself, it shows your marginal character well.
As for the story, after searching for it, (you again left only a title and category to find it), was marred with multiple mis-spellings, bad sentence stucture and excessive use of quote marks. If this is a real life experience, it reflects the theme of over 1000 other stories in the same category only yours is poorly written and lacked editing. I am suprised you got it passed the editor.

If this is all you have to offer, don't bother.

OMG! Very Harsh and totally out of order!.
This is ampics, you don't expect professional quality pics here do you?
You certainly know how to give encouragement, to a newbie.

Take no notice of this loser sweetie and post what you want when you want.
Lit is meant to be fun

 

[jello_man]

Its a great 1st pic and hope to see more soon! Thank you for sharing!

 

[ShyGuy68]

If this is all you have to offer, don't bother.

If you don't have anything postive to say, don't bother!

 

[bbqribs68]

Very nice...

Any impute good or bad is welcome.... On my profile photo.

Petite, your profile pic shows enough to see that you've got a lovely figure, and nice breasts! You shouldn't be uncomfortable showing it off at all, for it's obvious it looks good to us!! I'm looking forward to seeing more of you and watching you grow in your erotic ventures...hopefully you will continue sharing them with us. Please don't allow the stupidity and rudeness of one person destroy the beauty of your exhibitionism and fun. The vast majority of us on here love even the attempt made, and are understanding of the learning curve, and appreciate that so many amateurs are willing to contribute and be so openly vunerable. Personally, I'm much more turned on by beautiful amateur photos, than the professional models.

Just like how our country's freedom makes it possible for some idiots to speak out against the country that has blessed them, this forum can be interrupted by idiots who just want to be mean, while enjoying all the naked pics. I don't understand those kind of people.

Anyway...thank you for starting your thread....please continue to share with those of us who will appreciate it, drool all over it, and dream that we could have it. Now...I'm off to read your story!!!

 

[lakesailer_mi]

etite: Your profile photo is great. Don't let others get to you. (That other sailer is clearly salt water, all crusty and coarse, us freshwater guys are much more fun!).
We'd like to see more if you feel like it!

 

[pktaker]

Your picture leaves a lot to be desired. More detail, clearer, seductive are a few items that could have improved it. Only one picture is not much of a start when the picture is of marginal quality to start with. If this is how you want to represent yourself, it shows your marginal character well.
As for the story, after searching for it, (you again left only a title and category to find it), was marred with multiple mis-spellings, bad sentence stucture and excessive use of quote marks. If this is a real life experience, it reflects the theme of over 1000 other stories in the same category only yours is poorly written and lacked editing. I am suprised you got it passed the editor.

If this is all you have to offer, don't bother.

dude, what the fuck, after all this is a AM site and be happy with the fact that people are willing to share their pics and fantasies with complete strangers. It's a free site and everyone tries their best to follow the guidelines. Maybe she was extremely arroused remembering the details of what happened when she was writing her story and was just so fucking excited and turned on.
Her pics are gorgeous and so is she, after all it is her choice as to what she shares, not yours. If she wants to take her time and let her confidence build up, then more power to her, but she doesn't have to get totally naked and show everything right from the start, if she doesn't want to.
She's in control of what she wants and desires not us.....

 

[youngleo]

demich, very erotic

 

[petite34c]

Thanks

Hey Pretty Lad, we have no issues, you keep shoeing us all teh shower pictures you like, we love them. Here are a few pictures of us as promised. Hope you enjoy!!!!

demich

Thanks for sharing, but WHY are you posting the photos into my thread???

I beleive the members are wanting, expecting to see photos of me, not your Lady.

Kind of like this?

Mary.

 

[QSco]

demich

Thanks for sharing but WHY are you posting the photos into my thread???

I beleive the members are wanting, expecting to see photos of me, NOT your Lady.

Kind of like this?

Mary.

O my, now that's what I like to see

 

[seasider]

Kind of like this?

Mary.

definitely like that- you have a lovely body, you can share my shower anytime

 

[Kazoora]

demich

Thanks for sharing, but WHY are you posting the photos into my thread???

I beleive the members are wanting, expecting to see photos of me, not your Lady.

Kind of like this?

Mary.

Very nice -- more, more, more! *s*

 

[subGenius]

Hey Pretty Lad, we have no issues, you keep shoeing us all teh shower pictures you like, we love them. Here are a few pictures of us as promised. Hope you enjoy!!!!

You should start your own thread, man.

 

[Coven911]

demich

Thanks for sharing, but WHY are you posting the photos into my thread???

I beleive the members are wanting, expecting to see photos of me, not your Lady.

Kind of like this?

Mary.

Yes.....exactly like that...damn..the thoughts!

 

[subGenius]

Kind of like this?

Mary.

I love that one. Would you be taking requests? I would love to see your hot body all soaped up in the tub

 

[albertaboy]

Luv the full shower pic.

 

[gbd]

Thanks Petite!

Sexy pic Mary! Thanks for showing. Keep them cumming.

 

[o_ruanaidh]

Lovely pics Mary! Thanks for sharing! What's the back tattoo of?

 

[IfItsThisName]

Your picture leaves a lot to be desired. More detail, clearer, seductive are a few items that could have improved it. Only one picture is not much of a start when the picture is of marginal quality to start with. If this is how you want to represent yourself, it shows your marginal character well.
As for the story, after searching for it, (you again left only a title and category to find it), was marred with multiple mis-spellings, bad sentence stucture and excessive use of quote marks. If this is a real life experience, it reflects the theme of over 1000 other stories in the same category only yours is poorly written and lacked editing. I am suprised you got it passed the editor.

If this is all you have to offer, don't bother.

And we have an early front runner for May's "Dick of the Month!"

 

[youngleo]

The shower pic was hott

 

[hardcanuck69]

beautiful sexy pics....thanks for sharing and definitely want to see more....