New Challenge: Fill in the blanks

[Savage Kitten]

This challenge is inspired by rnabokov's "I want to kiss you while you scream ".

The title of your poem will be; "I want to _________ you while you scream". You fill in the blank and create your poem around the title.

I'll work on mine and post it here shortly. You guys have fun! I'm giving you a lil time before I bring out the really hard stuff.

Sk~

 

[MissTaken]

SK

I haven't had an opportunity to actively participate in your quickies, but think they are great.

I mentally play with them and may actually post at some point.

Keep em coming~

 

[Masked Poet]

edit

 

[SA Storm]

I want to watch while you scream

edit coming.

 

[KatPurrs]

I Want To Tease You While You Scream!

It's a fun game we play,
where no one's a loser
and the last to arrive takes the prize.

Our eyes must not shut,
action can't stop,
and one can't touch the other.

With images of hands ablur,
and a duet of animal sounds,
we feel ourselves begin to peak.

I want to tease you while you scream
first.

 

[daughter]

SA

SA--

Glad to see a new work. You wrote:


that in the cutting of flesh, bone
sparks will fly.

'sparks will fly'? Sounds painful. I have an idea what you wanted to convey, but the connotation here doesn't work for me.

Thanks for the read.

Peace,

daughter

 

[darrenfate]

Daughter - despite an editor's view over my shoulder I shall respond to this challenge in my next post. Zawadi - Goodness, again, is beauty and beauty is that which promises happiness to the family and community. A wise word.

Savage Kitten, old friend. Thanks for inviting me here. I really like these challenges. Keep them up! Great Av now, btw it seems to suit you. Your writing has grown full and rich during your time spent at Lit. Be proud of the writer and poet that you have become.

 

[Savage Kitten]

Savage Kitten, old friend. Thanks for inviting me here. I really like these challenges. Keep them up! Great Av now, btw it seems to suit you. Your writing has grown full and rich during your time spent at Lit. Be proud of the writer and poet that you have become.

Hey old pal! *grinz* I am honored that you actually came over to my neck of the woods! hehe So... are you really gonna take the challenge though?

Thank you for your compliments about my writing. I'm not alone ya know! I've been keeping up with your threads over in the SRP forum and you just keep getting better with each post!

Sk~

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Scream

I want to lick you while you scream, my tonue to play a tune,
feel your muscle pulsing,as you sail beyond the moon.

I want your rosebud,hard and full,there throbbimg in delight
To swirl a tongue around her, then lips, to hold so tight

I want to suck her, hard and slow, then gently bite the tip
feel your deep vibration, lying locked, between your hips

I want to lick you as you scream, and taste your honey sweet,
is only then I`ll slide it in,and make your nite complete.

 

[daughter]

an editor's view

SA--

Ah, like it when you come back like that. lol Like the revision. I can handle the sparks now.

darrenfate--

Thanks for the compliments. The name suits my daughter well.
Welcome to our neck of the woods as SK aptly put it.

Savage--

I wrote you privately, but let me applaud you again for your personal growth and the wonderful job you're doing as a leader in this forum. It's a thankless job, but you do it well. Like what you do, poet.

Peace,

daughter

 

[truthpurveyor]

"edito"

 

[SlidingInSilk]

I want to walk away while you scream

This is the first time I have replied tp one of these. I've been reading some of it for about a week but this thread caught my attention and I just had to add.




Your kisses were a passion storm
Your body was my temple
I lived within your heart
Until today

Now that I have your full attention dear
And you're bound to our bed spread eagle
I'll tell you that I caught you

With him

Here

in our love nest

And I watched
you tear my heart out
while he tasted
what I thought was only for me

So this is my revenge
It's your turn to watch
Because I want to walk away
while you scream.

 

[HomerPindar]

Kitten, you rock -- keep on keeping us on our toes

For those who've been in the bootcamp, or who just want to learn a bit, this here is a pantoum. The pattern of repeating lines to rhyming scheme is the foundation of the poetic structure. Hope ya like it,

I want to be you as you scream
so badly do I want to posses you
I tear away your dress down the seam
to feel your response to all I do
so badly do I want to posses you
command, control, to hold you down
to feel your response to all I do
feeling you squirm as you're bound
command, control, to hold you down
taking you against your will
feeling you squirm as you're bound
thrusting deep within you to get my fill
taking you against your will
your fear becomes your thrill
thrusting deep within you to get my fill
at first you resisted it until
your fear becomes your thrill
I want to be you as you scream
at first you resisted it until
I tear away your dress down the seam

HomerPindar

 

[smithpeter]

If I slapped your hind quarters while you screamed you would rise up and strike me in the chops and then kiss me for feeling afraid and so cute in my fear of your fear while the tea water boils and you beg me not to listen to the hiss of water against flame soon to set off alarms against the backdrop of downheartedness that started this whole spanking thing till you scream and I feel bad and then get laid real good with windows open in February and later in August while it is hot and there are windows yawning but not bored with this constant baring of striking poses and too many uses of the words so often used.
Till you will be comfortable, striking me, my commas and disjointed use of uncomfortable language. You are welcome, my lover. Make me. Blue me. Black me too me.

 

[Ravenloft]

I want to drink of you while you scream

By Ravenloft.

The sweet champagne of your vein will coat my tongue where I have stung.

Your cried protests I will contest, upon crimson breast I have fest.

Pale and meak, you, I do seek, though you grow weak, you still shriek.

Why do you fight against my might? I keep you in my sight, even through your painful plight.

Keep me warm, and about your heart I will swarm, to keep you from harm...

Rest now love, I shall lift you above, you are my whitened dove.

 

[JUDO]

Devil inside

Now here's a ballad with a dark twist. I feel quite devilish, liking it so much.

I want to lick you while you scream

By Judo ©

I want to lick you while you scream
With silence made by thighs
A heaving chest with shaking breasts
Delights my girlish eyes.

I hold your gentle lips apart
And bathe that salmon glow
With flicks of tongue and finger which
Your husband will never know.

I met you after church that day
Your lips were painted red.
Blue eyes caught mine and held them tight
As out the door I led.

I drove so quick, you didn't know
Which way would take you back,
But before the door closed with a click
I had you in the sack.

I kissed your mouth and lips and breasts
As clothes came flying past.
You ripped your thong in lustful haste
I knew you wouldn't last.

I licked so slowly down your front
You stopped and said in fright,
"My man has never licked before."
I smiled and did you right.

A thrash, a roll, a screaming sigh
You echoed off the roof.
I brought you to the highest heights,
My cold heart stayed aloof.

Distant I felt as you came for me
I hope you felt betrayed
As I had when he left me, bitch,
For you, the one who prayed.

 

[lovetoread]

"I want to bind you while you scream"

Arms tied up,
wrists together.
Legs bound to the bed
with bits of leather.

The feather teases
the length of your body.
The touch fine,
not at all shoddy.

You beg and plead
for me to give you pleasure.
Not now I whisper,
this time I do treasure.

I kiss and touch you,
finally moving to your clit.
Your body jumps,
as though you have been lit.

Screams come out of you,
that you are unable to stop.
Your body nearly done,
as I bring you to the top.

Body limp as you lay there,
sweat covered and bound.
I love you is whispered,
knowing that is why I am around.

 

[ShamelessFlirt]

"I want to tempt you while you scream"


I want to tempt you while you scream.
Playing out my lustful scheme.
Over and over, a recurring theme.
Till you wonder "is it just a dream"?

Your shouts encourage, entice and delight.
Causing me to urge you long into the night,
to try some things as yet unexplored.
With me the one you've so long adored.

Each new sensation,
elicits a scream much louder.
The intense look on your face,
couldn't make me feel prouder.

Tempting you to dizzying heights.
Eyes shut tightly, blinded by the lights.

The louder you scream,
the more I tempt you to try more.
An unending cycle,
with possabilities galore.

 

[darrenfate]

I want to help you while you scream

Moving silently like a ghost
I arrive to be your host
in this night of carnal bliss
that all started with a kiss

Soon you found your aching heart
Wanted fulfillment not just art
Stripped naked not in haste
The last thing you are is chaste

You beg, exhort and plead
I see your wanton need
I will be the one for you
To give you what will pull you through

The rain pelts you as you scream
dark forces seem obscene
But I know your hidden desires
Have built these flames, this wall of fire

Naked howling at the moon
Your body writhes in perfect tune
To the sounds of lust fulfilled
It's lyrics your soul has spilled

Your blood rises as you scream
The cold rain creates a scene
Of love and lust gone amok
Is it truly me you fuck? ...