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bungakawa2000
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Interesting. 
I very much like nurses, so I might add to it...
Just a little detail: I was unsure at first is the main character was male or female. I see some threads branch off with the hero being a male ("Test your theory") and others with the hero being female ("Back to normal"). Just pay close attention so as not to have cross-gender storylines.
Bunga
I very much like nurses, so I might add to it...
Just a little detail: I was unsure at first is the main character was male or female. I see some threads branch off with the hero being a male ("Test your theory") and others with the hero being female ("Back to normal"). Just pay close attention so as not to have cross-gender storylines.
Bunga
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Yikes! To make things more confusing, the story is listed with a POV: 1st person, male but it starts as a 2nd person story... "Back to normal" is still 2nd person, but it switches to 1st person, female in the subsequent "You feel the need to..." thread!
Careful!
I recall, as a new author, I was afraid to reject threads, thinking it would ruin my reputation or whatnot... If you are submitted a thread that does not follow your story guidelines (including POV), don't be afraid to reject it. It'll hurt only those who can't understand guidelines are for the good of the story.
Bunga
Careful!
I recall, as a new author, I was afraid to reject threads, thinking it would ruin my reputation or whatnot... If you are submitted a thread that does not follow your story guidelines (including POV), don't be afraid to reject it. It'll hurt only those who can't understand guidelines are for the good of the story.
Bunga
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POV is tough
I had a difficult time when I first started keeping the POV consistent, and I agree with Bunga that there is a fear of rejecting a thread with a bad POV. However, that was the only way I learned how to keep it consistent and what the different POV's were.
I would suggest changing the POV in the story setup, which you can do in the new Chyoo since the 2nd person threads already written are good.
Your first story is good and I look forward to adding it, just edit the threads to get all of the POV's consistent.
I had a difficult time when I first started keeping the POV consistent, and I agree with Bunga that there is a fear of rejecting a thread with a bad POV. However, that was the only way I learned how to keep it consistent and what the different POV's were.
I would suggest changing the POV in the story setup, which you can do in the new Chyoo since the 2nd person threads already written are good.
Your first story is good and I look forward to adding it, just edit the threads to get all of the POV's consistent.
bungakawa2000
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I don't want to look as if I'm all criticism and no contributions: just wrote two threads for you. Both are after the first option "Back to normal". One is about a pervert, but headache-inclined boy and the other is about a lonely, weak lesbian.
Hope you'll like them.
Bunga
Hope you'll like them.
Bunga
Thanks for everything!
I'm working on reworking the threads for continuity's sake. I've redesignated the story 3rd Person Male, as that was A) what it was meant to be and B) what the majority of the posts are.
And is there a way to remove a thread that seems to have no point in the story?
I'm working on reworking the threads for continuity's sake. I've redesignated the story 3rd Person Male, as that was A) what it was meant to be and B) what the majority of the posts are.
And is there a way to remove a thread that seems to have no point in the story?
jakelyon
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I don't think you can delete a thread. All you can do is try to get it edited so if fits better wtih the story.
Everyone has approved a thread that you later go back and wonder why on earth you did.
Just contact the person who wrote it and see if they can change it to fit what you are looking for.
Everyone has approved a thread that you later go back and wonder why on earth you did.
Just contact the person who wrote it and see if they can change it to fit what you are looking for.
deathofcards
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I know you can only delete one of your own threads if it gets rejected. That's something, which would be a useful addition to a later version of chyoo the ability to delete threads.
niceguy2002tim
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Sounds good.
Well first off, Cutie569, I will try to read your story as soon as possible. I would have read it earlier but the confusing povs stopped me. Now that it is fixed there should be no problems.
My other thoughts are about deleting threads. If the thread is the last in the storyline I think it should be removable. If it's in the middle somewhere than it can't be removed. If it was taken out than it would leave any threads following in limbo. They'd have no connection to the story. Therefor I under stand why we can't delete threads from the stories.
The best new change from Chyoo is the ability of the editor to EDIT ALL threads in the story. Including the ones by other writers. I think that is the best thing. So maybe you can write a little section within that thread that ties it to your story?
Good luck,
Tim -(niceguy2002tim)
Well first off, Cutie569, I will try to read your story as soon as possible. I would have read it earlier but the confusing povs stopped me. Now that it is fixed there should be no problems.
My other thoughts are about deleting threads. If the thread is the last in the storyline I think it should be removable. If it's in the middle somewhere than it can't be removed. If it was taken out than it would leave any threads following in limbo. They'd have no connection to the story. Therefor I under stand why we can't delete threads from the stories.
The best new change from Chyoo is the ability of the editor to EDIT ALL threads in the story. Including the ones by other writers. I think that is the best thing. So maybe you can write a little section within that thread that ties it to your story?
Good luck,
Tim -(niceguy2002tim)
New Goldeneye Thread
Hey everyone! I've added a new post to Goldeneye about Amy's reaction to being MC'd and starting today this thread will be my own official thread! Woohoo!
I've got a few more ideas I'm working on, mostly MC because that's my little guilty pleasure, but I hope that everyone out there helps to make my other fics as successful as Goldeneye.
Hey everyone! I've added a new post to Goldeneye about Amy's reaction to being MC'd and starting today this thread will be my own official thread! Woohoo!
I've got a few more ideas I'm working on, mostly MC because that's my little guilty pleasure, but I hope that everyone out there helps to make my other fics as successful as Goldeneye.
deathofcards
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I finally got around to reading Goldeneye yesterday. I liked the story and I think it's quite an interesting concept. Normally I'm not too keen on the MC stuff but the meteorite thing made me think of JMS's Rising Stars comic. I'm planning on adding something to it some time soon.
deathofcards
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I am planning on writing some more stuff for Goldeneye. I may downplay the sexual side of things though, but I have got what I think are some good ideas for a story.
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Somebody help me out...newbie....what is CHYOO?
niceguy2002tim
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Chyoo...
Hello,
you ask what is Chyoo. Well you want to know what C.H.Y.O.O stands for? Or you want to know what the whole experience is? I will tell you the first part, and leave it up to the other great members of this site to tell you the other half.
Chyoo.... is CHoose Your Own O(you decide what the O is). It is based on the classic Choose Your Own Adventure stories.
Alrighty?
I know what the O stands for to me.
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
Hello,
you ask what is Chyoo. Well you want to know what C.H.Y.O.O stands for? Or you want to know what the whole experience is? I will tell you the first part, and leave it up to the other great members of this site to tell you the other half.
Chyoo.... is CHoose Your Own O(you decide what the O is). It is based on the classic Choose Your Own Adventure stories.
Alrighty?
I know what the O stands for to me.
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
New fic!
With a turn around time of only two days, my newest fic is up!
I got to thinking "Where do mind Controlers learn their art, and Mind Control University was my answer. Give a look, leave me a thread.
With a turn around time of only two days, my newest fic is up!
I got to thinking "Where do mind Controlers learn their art, and Mind Control University was my answer. Give a look, leave me a thread.
niceguy2002tim
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Interesting...
Actually,
I am looking at her last post and it now says December 1969. I guess '69 was a good year. lol.
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
Actually,
I am looking at her last post and it now says December 1969. I guess '69 was a good year. lol.
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
cutieangel
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New Goldeneye Thread
Check out Goldeneye!
The dean is enslaved and you get to decide the next expression of our horny hero's powers. Take a look.
Check out Goldeneye!
The dean is enslaved and you get to decide the next expression of our horny hero's powers. Take a look.
cutieangel
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A big thanks for DOC's new thread!
A gracious thanks to Deathofcards for his newest Goldeneye thread A conflict of control A nice little twist and lots of hot sex (which is why we're all here).
Check it out.
A gracious thanks to Deathofcards for his newest Goldeneye thread A conflict of control A nice little twist and lots of hot sex (which is why we're all here).
Check it out.
cutieangel
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And still more!
A special thanks to Gystex for two kick ass threads, See how deep you can put her under and Stay in Cyndi's body
check em out.
A special thanks to Gystex for two kick ass threads, See how deep you can put her under and Stay in Cyndi's body
check em out.
