Demona83
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New Author wants feedback
Hello everyone! I've recently joined here, and I've posted my first story! I would love some feedback. I'm in the middle of another story, and would like to know how this one is received before I post the rest of the second one. Anything would help. Thanks!
The link is:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=440640
It's in the Erotic Couplings category, titled "Happiness"
Hello everyone! I've recently joined here, and I've posted my first story! I would love some feedback. I'm in the middle of another story, and would like to know how this one is received before I post the rest of the second one. Anything would help. Thanks!
The link is:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=440640
It's in the Erotic Couplings category, titled "Happiness"
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