New Author Nomination Thread

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http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=28062

"Met My Old Lover In A Grocery Store"

Submitted for your approval.

Too raw? Not enough dialogue? Is there such a thing as "wistful" sex? Will Dan Fogelberg ever forgive me?

My first, so be gentle.

Jocund Day
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"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence you know."
Ernest Hemingway "A Moveable Feast"
 
I would like to withdraw the nomination for my story: "Seducing Jen," from the rotation at this time.
 
Into this sea of critique, I'd like to cast my first Lit. effort.

title: Dis-Orderly Conduct Ch 1
catagory: Erotic Coupling
author: Rumple Foreskin
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=35740

This 5K word story will be completed on the 4K word Dis-Orderly Conduct Ch 2 which Laurel says she'll try to place back-to-back with Ch 1. (should have been called parts, not chapters) Input on the time and POV shifts plus the sex/porn/erotic segments would be appreciated. RF
 
So i made a mistake

Ooops...this shouldn't be here

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Not Really a
Doctor Blue
 
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Ok, I will dangle my first attempt in front of the sharks and see what happens....

It is a romance, to read it just click the link at the bottom of the post!

<crosses fingers and wishes myself luck>
 
I have posted my first story. It is a bit subdued as I wet my feet. My next chapter will be hotter. I would like some guidance.

Title: Day's End

Category: Exhibitionism and Voyeurism

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=39946

I will try to follow all guidelines, if I understand them. I am an innocent newbie. Well, not so innocent
 
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