New Author, New Story

[mrwednesday87]

Hi everyone, I'm new around here and have posted my first story, "Sighs." I'm interested to here wha people think about it, or if there are any suggestions. this one is as much about seduction as it is about sex. If people like it enough, I might try a more experimental/raunchier short story next.

Here's the link, if you're interested:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=424298