oralymastered
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- Nov 4, 2011
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I am a new author. Having said that let me explain that I have written many short 300 to 600 word short stories in the first person format meant to titillate or arouse a certain individual through e mail erotica.
This is my first storyline written to arouse but to be published in a public venue ie., Literotica. My desire is to write several chapters on the same subject line. In this case it is an incest story line that I think starts with a twist. Why I choice a mother and son as my first characters I do not know ( must be something that I created in my mind 60 years ago or so ) So if anyone here has an interest in editing a first timers story please let me know.
I would like it not only proof read for spelling and grammar ( I did check it with word ) but also for readability and proper formatting. I will except all criticisms and suggestions also.
Please if it has no merit I want to know this also.
Thanks in advance and I will wait to hear from you.
This is my first storyline written to arouse but to be published in a public venue ie., Literotica. My desire is to write several chapters on the same subject line. In this case it is an incest story line that I think starts with a twist. Why I choice a mother and son as my first characters I do not know ( must be something that I created in my mind 60 years ago or so ) So if anyone here has an interest in editing a first timers story please let me know.
I would like it not only proof read for spelling and grammar ( I did check it with word ) but also for readability and proper formatting. I will except all criticisms and suggestions also.
Please if it has no merit I want to know this also.
Thanks in advance and I will wait to hear from you.
