New author, BDSM story

[girlatheart]

New author, Positive/Negative feedback appreciated

A couple of months ago I posted a story, Trained to Face-Fuck. It was 2nd person POV, error ridden and overall awful. I got a ton of great feedback on here and reworked the story completely.

I would appreciate any feedback, positive or negative.

Thanks,
Kim

https://www.literotica.com/s/watery-eyes

 

[lovecraft68]

Left my opinion in a comment, not my style of story, but writing was good and you got under my skin meaning you did your job and got a reaction. In general a solid piece.