New author - 35k words, minority bisexual teens, love triangle, coming out of age

s_ericsson

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Dear all

I'm a new author and haven't written/published anything longer than the current story I'm writing. It already has 35k words split into 4 parts and I'm planning to publish these parts first as a separate work. The story is regarding two minority bisexual girls and their relationship and sex life in London. One of the girls is really having a lot of good sex and the other is just having non-vaginal sex with the first girl. The first girl gets into relationships with another minority girl who in her turn is an interracial adult performer.

There is a lot of sex and also some alcohol and even cocaine combined with some moral dilemmas that the girls face as they're coming out of age.

Further parts of the novel are already drafted but I'll publish them as separate works continuing the story when they're ready. In total the novel shall be near 100k words and will be heavily illustrated.

As you may have understood English is not my first language and there may be some number of unintentional mistakes and parts that are hard to be understood. I've tried my best to check the work with Grammarly, etc.

I'm looking for an editor who can help me edit the work before I'll publish it here on Literotica. I won't argue with any suggestions and I'm open to any criticism as I fully understand that my writing has flaws. Specific areas of editing - English grammar. Word processor - Google docs / Word.
 
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If you're interested, I can offer to look at a few pages to help you with formatting and so forth. But not beyond that, given the length.
 
Thanks a lot for the reply. Yes, I am interested. I'll be very grateful if you'll give me tips on

- past perfect/past present
- formatting of direct speech/thoughts.

I'll then use these tips alongside any other changes as an example to work on the draft.

How can I share the draft with you? Should I pm you the .doc file?
 
Email is in my profile. Word is fine, or if you have gmail send with google doc.
 
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