New and looking for some comments...

[Ooohkitty]

hello my names Christy and i've posted my first story here

It's a Ex @ Voy about a woman at the mall

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=907

i was just hopeing to get some comments good or bad about my style writing

You can be harsh but please not too harsh, i bruise easy

Luv,
Christy

 

[lilguy]

pretty damm good. It nice seeing a woman perspective

 

[Ooohkitty]

please add

Please anyone who wishs to add to my story feel free.
i'll be doing additions to my story and others on wednesday
have fun with it

luv,
Christy

 

[Ooohkitty]

thanks everyone

i want to thank AaronWebster, Zingiber, kendahl6969, and lilguy,
for adding to my little story
so far we have teased a shoe store clerk, an ice cream scooper, a pet store owner, a lingerie clerk, and Santa Clause
its now 9 deep with 51 threads
and i love each and everyone of them
thank you for all you help.
and once again thank you AaronWebster, Zingiber, kendahl6969, and lilguy, for helping me getting off to my own story.

luv,
Christy
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http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=907