for a reader.
A rare departure in itself
It's designated incest but hopefully not the usual fare, it's got a story for starters, a beginning, and an end, sort of, and it's entirely lacking in brothers and sisters. Anyone brave enough to volunteer, pop me a PM. I don't so much want an editor as objective opinion on the credibility of the main plot.
It's late here, I'll look to through again in the morning and send out tomorrow.
A rare departure in itself
It's designated incest but hopefully not the usual fare, it's got a story for starters, a beginning, and an end, sort of, and it's entirely lacking in brothers and sisters. Anyone brave enough to volunteer, pop me a PM. I don't so much want an editor as objective opinion on the credibility of the main plot.
It's late here, I'll look to through again in the morning and send out tomorrow.
