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need some feedback

what do you think about the sample below

  • yes keep going just like this

    Votes: 3 42.9%

  • no this holds no appeal

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • maybe not so much of the hard stuff

    Votes: 1 14.3%

  • oh god yes just like that and maybe more

    Votes: 3 42.9%
  • Total voters
    7
you need to edit better, especially paragraphing.
the better forum to get feedback would be Story Feedback.
 
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