I have found some help. Thank you for reading this.
I have written a story, my first to be published here on literotica. It is 8200 words, right now it is in .doc format, and as the title says, Incest is the category.
The story is about a male college student who is bullied by another male student who perceives him as gay. The bullies (also bullied) 'bi' brother is brought into the situation to help the bully exact his "punishment" for being gay. Enter a sister who isn't the school slut, but she does enjoy heterosexual activity frequently, she winds up taking advantage of her brother, believing that he is still a virgin, but getting a whole different picture of him before the story ends, thanks to mom's help.
I consider myself a decent writer, and my grammar is basic, though in speech, sometimes I am not sure how to use quotes, so that is the biggest structure assistance that I need. I would prefer to have a female look at this and give me some tips as to the woman's side of sexual relations and how to describe, but if any males are comfortable with this, then pm me and I will send the file.
Thank you in advance.
I have written a story, my first to be published here on literotica. It is 8200 words, right now it is in .doc format, and as the title says, Incest is the category.
The story is about a male college student who is bullied by another male student who perceives him as gay. The bullies (also bullied) 'bi' brother is brought into the situation to help the bully exact his "punishment" for being gay. Enter a sister who isn't the school slut, but she does enjoy heterosexual activity frequently, she winds up taking advantage of her brother, believing that he is still a virgin, but getting a whole different picture of him before the story ends, thanks to mom's help.
I consider myself a decent writer, and my grammar is basic, though in speech, sometimes I am not sure how to use quotes, so that is the biggest structure assistance that I need. I would prefer to have a female look at this and give me some tips as to the woman's side of sexual relations and how to describe, but if any males are comfortable with this, then pm me and I will send the file.
Thank you in advance.
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