Need help with creating new erotic story

[Lolita30]

It's been a while since i've submitted anything; I have a brain storm but my problem is how to make this brainstorm into a hot story. I have a character in mind (an actor who just turned 18) who, in my story is not as innocent and sweet as he appears on television/movies.

The main character of this story would be his personal assistant, a young woman fresh out of college and new to L.A.

Anyone out there who can help me I would greatly appreciate it!

Have a good one!

 

[AchtungNight]

Lit authors who have done good stories of this nature include CarnageJackson and myself. Read over them- you might get ideas. Best of luck.

 

[CharleyH]

It's been a while since i've submitted anything; I have a brain storm but my problem is how to make this brainstorm into a hot story. I have a character in mind (an actor who just turned 18) who, in my story is not as innocent and sweet as he appears on television/movies.

The main character of this story would be his personal assistant, a young woman fresh out of college and new to L.A.

Anyone out there who can help me I would greatly appreciate it!

Have a good one!

You have your characters, so fantasize and then write it down.

 

[SexSweetheart]

It's been a while since i've submitted anything; I have a brain storm but my problem is how to make this brainstorm into a hot story. I have a character in mind (an actor who just turned 18) who, in my story is not as innocent and sweet as he appears on television/movies.

The main character of this story would be his personal assistant, a young woman fresh out of college and new to L.A.

Anyone out there who can help me I would greatly appreciate it!

Have a good one!

This is the hardest thing to do.

What do you want these characters to do and what is the sitting for the story? Answer these questions and your fantasies will begin to happen.

I would make the young man a strong dominate male who wants to take the female by seductive force.

 

[Lolita30]

thanks for responding

there lies the problem; how to get to that point of where this man become the dominator? i don't want to rush the plot but at the same time i want to build up to that point without it seeming fake you know?

 

[SexSweetheart]

there lies the problem; how to get to that point of where this man become the dominator? i don't want to rush the plot but at the same time i want to build up to that point without it seeming fake you know?

That is a problem. You can use a flash back method, where the person thinks back to where it all started.

If you would like to chat more privately you can contact me directly through the contact tab on my bio page http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=185827

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

there lies the problem; how to get to that point of where this man become the dominator? i don't want to rush the plot but at the same time i want to build up to that point without it seeming fake you know?

Lolita,
One thing I've learned is that the personality of a character is set before you begin writing. Subs do not become Doms and vice a versa. The characters in your story should be the same kind a character you would meet in real life. In other words, the character would be strong from the very beginning. Frankly, anyone who has made it as a television actor or even on the stage or movies would be a strong individual to begin with. They don't make it otherwise.

Going from there to dominance over your heroine should be a natural progression if you just allow the characters the freedom to act as they would in real life.

Does that make any sense at all?

 

[SexSweetheart]

Lolita,
One thing I've learned is that the personality of a character is set before you begin writing. Subs do not become Doms and vice a versa. The characters in your story should be the same kind a character you would meet in real life. In other words, the character would be strong from the very beginning. Frankly, anyone who has made it as a television actor or even on the stage or movies would be a strong individual to begin with. They don't make it otherwise.

Going from there to dominance over your heroine should be a natural progression if you just allow the characters the freedom to act as they would in real life.

Does that make any sense at all?

This makes are great deal of sense. Some people do change with the situation and development of the environment.

JJ you have an interesting new aviator.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

This makes are great deal of sense. Some people do change with the situation and development of the environment.

JJ you have an interesting new aviator.

That pic was taken by me g/f a couple years ago... probably my best side

Yes. Characters do change but they change the same way people do in real life - through catharsis. Am I right?

 

[Huckleman2000]

I'm not sure, never having had a personal assistant, but some situations where hotness might happen are:

- Helping him learn his lines for an upcoming scene
- He's working on acting scenes for a class (lots of actors take classes compulsively) or an upcoming audition, maybe for a part that would break his 'nice guy' image
- He has to interview personal trainers to help him get in shape for an upcoming role, and she is coordinating the interviews

Hope that helps!

 

[3113]

The main character of this story would be his personal assistant, a young woman fresh out of college and new to L.A.

I suggest you go see the movie The Devil Wears Prada--it's about an innocent personal assistant, new to the fashion world of New York, also the movie Two Weeks Notice--and I suggest you watch some of the series "Entourage."

Prada will give you an idea of how badly personal assistants can be treated--and trust me, Hollywood actors are as demanding of their assistants as New York Fashion Mag. editors.

Nor is this relationship really Dom and Sub. It's more like a spoilt child with a mother who gives into every demand. The trick is, once the assistant gets to know all his/her employer's foibles, they become invaluable. And the actor finds is hard to impossible to let the assistant go--because the assistant knows exaclty how they want their coffee and their salad at lunch, exactly what to say to make them feel better when they're sad, etc. You get the kind of relationship you see in Two Weeks, where the assistant is so in tune with the employer that he/she is like their right arm.

"Entourage" will give you an idea of the extremes that an actor can and will go to given his fame and money to throw around. How much a playground Hollywood can be for an actor who has a pretty face and popularity.

Does that help?

 

[Lolita30]

Lolita,
One thing I've learned is that the personality of a character is set before you begin writing. Subs do not become Doms and vice a versa. The characters in your story should be the same kind a character you would meet in real life. In other words, the character would be strong from the very beginning. Frankly, anyone who has made it as a television actor or even on the stage or movies would be a strong individual to begin with. They don't make it otherwise.

Going from there to dominance over your heroine should be a natural progression if you just allow the characters the freedom to act as they would in real life.

Does that make any sense at all?

It kinda makes sense; i just have to sort all of this out first; gee, it's been years since I've written!