Need help with a difficult idea

[Naughty_Librarian]

I am a long time reader, first time poster. I have been an editor of erotica in the past, but feel compelled now to write a story of my own and put it out there. My problem is this: I have an idea that has really caught my attention, but I don't know how to make it come to fruition. I have a strong inclination that it will become a longer, mult-part story (my fav kind as a reader and editor), and I think I'm going to need a second (or third, or fourth) mind to help me keep it on track, making sense, and appealing to the readers.

So, here's the idea, and it can be summed up in my proposed title: Oral Slave. I imagine a story wherein a man (or a woman) becomes a slave to the idea of giving oral sex to a woman (and I'm sure that I want a woman to be the recipient; I have to write what I like at this point, and a man receiving oral sex is not one of those things at this point). I don't envision it as a bondage and/or humiliation situation, just as situation where a man or a woman gets to a point where he or she receives all his or her sexual pleasure from giving oral, and the partner of this person likes it this way because he or she, well, likes receiving oral (and who doesn't) and might only be able to have an orgasm this way. I have already envision a climactic scene for this story, in which the Oral Master sets up a party in which the Slave "services" a large group of the Master's associates and friends.

BTW, I love F/F stories, and I'd like to stick to this format, but I don't have to. I just get the most pleasure out of those kinds of stories, and isn't that what erotic authorship is all about?

All interested parties please PM me. I want to get started ASAP. TIA

 

[MathGirl]

Sounds a bit like "The Story of O."
MG

 

[Guest]

But "Oral Slave" does conjure up BDSM, don't you think?

IMHO, and in order, I would suggest fully developing your very interesting story first (especially if you are happy with F-F, go with your gut), step back after you are finished with it and look at what Lit genre/category it fits into best, and finally decide on a title last.

After you get "something" down on paper, you may want to solicit help from one of Lit's volunteer editors, or maybe one of the many female-female oral sex Authors/Writers/Readers/Addicts here on Lit could offer assistance.

Best of luck.

 

[Weird Harold]

So, here's the idea, and it can be summed up in my proposed title: Oral Slave.
...
I have already envision a climactic scene for this story, in which the Oral Master sets up a party in which the Slave "services" a large group of the Master's associates and friends.

Your scenario certainly sounds like a BDSM story although it could be worked a bit to fit into the fetish category.


Might I suggest the premise that two people (women) meet whose Oral fixations mesh so perfectly would be destroyed by incuding a group scene as a finale will limit your ability to explore the characters' feelings. Perhaps you might consider that they meet in a group setting and slowly evolve into oral soulmates.

Perhaps a better title would beOral Fixations.