Need Editor - short 3 page story

[Cycliste]

I'm looking for an editor. I wrote my first ever short story. It is less than 3 pages. I think my grammar is pretty spot on. I am interested in feedback on content and flow. First few paragraphs just do not read right to me. I'd like feedback in that area in particular. Since this is my first story, any other feedback I may have not mentioned is greatly appreciated. Thanks for taking the time.

 

[PennLady]

It would help to know what category (Romance, Incest, etc.) you wrote in, and when you'd need/like it back.

 

[Cycliste]

It would help to know what category (Romance, Incest, etc.) you wrote in, and when you'd need/like it back.

Solo session...masturbation.

I'm anxious for feedback so I'd love a 1-2 week turn around. However, I have no deadline so that is completely flexible.

 

[Dream_Operator]

I sent you a PM. If you are interested let me know.