Need editor for story about romantic control

[EllaPure]

I need thoughts on the overall story. It's the first one I've written and I know the ending is weak, so I need ideas on how to strengthen that part. I also want an opinion on the story as a whole.

This story is not heavy BDSM, more light control and romance.

Thank you

 

[NeilSherman]

Sounds more like you want a collaborator than an editor.