EDITORS PRIORITIES
1. My story is 3,000 words long. It is about a college coed masturbatrix who uses tease and denial, spanking, and erotic humiliation to teach self-control to an older Professor.
The category is BDSM and the story tags are: femdom, MF, masturbatrix, CBT, dominant coed, submissive older professor, erotic humiliation, supervised masturbation, spanking, tease and denial.
If these are not the kind of tags that rock your boat then please don’t dip your oar in the water. On the other hand, if you are a fan of this genre, I would greatly appreciate your brutally honest opinion of this story as a work of literature and as a work of erotica.
2. I am a college graduate with a reasonable command of the English language. I detest finding spelling errors in literature, mine or anyone else’s, but unfortunately I am a terrible speller.
Your top priority, should you choose to accept this mission impossible, will be to find and eliminate those pesky miss-spellings that have eluded my spell checker. Any corrections of grammar or punctuation will be considered a bonus.
3. Although not my favorite POV, the story was written in 1st person at the request of a friend. Did I get the POV “right”?
4. Am I consistent in my use of past and present tenses?
Thank you for your help.
1. My story is 3,000 words long. It is about a college coed masturbatrix who uses tease and denial, spanking, and erotic humiliation to teach self-control to an older Professor.
The category is BDSM and the story tags are: femdom, MF, masturbatrix, CBT, dominant coed, submissive older professor, erotic humiliation, supervised masturbation, spanking, tease and denial.
If these are not the kind of tags that rock your boat then please don’t dip your oar in the water. On the other hand, if you are a fan of this genre, I would greatly appreciate your brutally honest opinion of this story as a work of literature and as a work of erotica.
2. I am a college graduate with a reasonable command of the English language. I detest finding spelling errors in literature, mine or anyone else’s, but unfortunately I am a terrible speller.
Your top priority, should you choose to accept this mission impossible, will be to find and eliminate those pesky miss-spellings that have eluded my spell checker. Any corrections of grammar or punctuation will be considered a bonus.
3. Although not my favorite POV, the story was written in 1st person at the request of a friend. Did I get the POV “right”?
4. Am I consistent in my use of past and present tenses?
Thank you for your help.
