Need an editor for a Halloween story

[Munachi]

Hi... I am working right now on a story for the Halloween contest - so it is kind of short notice, but I just didn't manage to get it written before, and it still needs some work, for which I would really like some help...

The computer I am on doesn't seem to have a word counting function, but it is right now 24 pages on open office... The story is meant for the erotic horror section...

One of the things I need help with is language - I am not a native speaker of English, and thus need someone to help me especially with grammar.

I also need some tips content-wise though. The storyline is a bit complicated, and I changed it a few times while writing, so I need someone to see if it is still understandable and coherent... Also, I always have some trouble with writing the sex scenes, so a few tips in what concerns that would also be appreciated...

Thanks in advance...

 

[tallguy220@hotm]

Hi... I am working right now on a story for the Halloween contest - so it is kind of short notice, but I just didn't manage to get it written before, and it still needs some work, for which I would really like some help...

The computer I am on doesn't seem to have a word counting function, but it is right now 24 pages on open office... The story is meant for the erotic horror section...

One of the things I need help with is language - I am not a native speaker of English, and thus need someone to help me especially with grammar.

I also need some tips content-wise though. The storyline is a bit complicated, and I changed it a few times while writing, so I need someone to see if it is still understandable and coherent... Also, I always have some trouble with writing the sex scenes, so a few tips in what concerns that would also be appreciated...

Thanks in advance...

Hi Munachi. I can help you out. Please check my pm.

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