Need an editor for a first sory

[ruuddog]

*I edited this and I apologize for my first request......I had a few alcoholic refreshments before i made that request*

If you are interested i can send you the what I have so far.

By the way I am new to this so my writing will probably be a little rough.

i have about 23k words so far in 6 complete Chapters plus another two chapters I am revising.

This first story is a lesbian fetish story:

includes age play domination water sports no scat to this point but it may be possible. There is anal (both oral and toys)

 

[AsylumSeeker]

i need an editor for a first story may need a lot of help i am writing a series of short storys with the same characters i would appreciate anyones help

Word length and category would be helpful.

 

[RedJohnny]

i need an editor for a first story may need a lot of help i am writing a series of short storys with the same characters i would appreciate anyones help

There's a possibility that English is not your native language. If that's the case, then you might consider asking if someone who speaks your native language would be willing to help you.

If that's not the case, then, given that the request contains no punctuation or capitalization, a spelling error and at least one missing word, I would be loathe to take on what is likely to be a task on par with the cleaning of the Augean stables.

If you're not even going to make the effort to fix those kinds of errors in your request for assistance, are you looking for an editor to fix those kinds of things? That's not what an editor is for (especially not one who's volunteering time).