Need a females point of view

[roxs12ems]

I have written a story that needs a little help in the editing and content department. For the first time I wrote from the perspective of a woman and would appreciate some feedback as I found this a challenging endeavor. The story is approx. 6000 words and contains topics like reluctance, lesbian, BDSM, Public.
Please feel free to contact me about this project
Matt

 

[Shaytoplay]

I have written a story that needs a little help in the editing and content department. For the first time I wrote from the perspective of a woman and would appreciate some feedback as I found this a challenging endeavor. The story is approx. 6000 words and contains topics like reluctance, lesbian, BDSM, Public.
Please feel free to contact me about this project
Matt

where's the story?

 

[sr71plt]

where's the story?

As the OP said, you need to contact the author to see the story. It's against the forum rules to post it here.