Need a feedback a story I'm currently working on.

[Sai_dias_29]

Right now, I'm working an incest story that has superpower elements in it. The editor I'm working with right now has been wonderful in helping writing this, but I would like a outside opinion on the story. Someone who hasn't read it, so that I can get a fresh, outside perspective.

 

[ElectricBlue]

You should put this request in the Editors' Forum. This Feedback Forum is for discussion after a story has been published, not before.

 

[Sai_dias_29]

Thank you!