Need a editor

[twistedson17]

Hey. This is my first time submitting a story to this site. I ould really use an editor to go over my story.

 

[pointless]

then maybe you should try the editing forum, you fucking moron.

 

[ms_ann_thrope]

That's funny to me.

 

[twistedson17]

Sorry

Like I said its my first time posting any thing on this site.

 

[ms_ann_thrope]

Like I said its my first time posting any thing on this site.

Ain't nobody here wants to work that hard.

 

[pointless]

huh. he actually did what i suggested. that's almost refreshing.

 

[ms_ann_thrope]

Ain't nobody there wants to work that hard either.

 

[LiFeNdEaTh]

created a new name for this thread? lol

 

[Mockingjay]

Hey. This is my first time submitting a story to this site. I ould really use an editor to go over my story.

You pretty need an editor.

Check this forum.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9

 

[RobDownSouth]

huh. he actually did what i suggested. that's almost refreshing.

First time for everything. Now go double-down and demand some anal from your wife.

 

[parodyluvr75]

http://www.reverso.net/spell-checker/english-spelling-grammar/

 

[Younghorny69]

Hey. This is my first time submitting a story to this site. I ould really use an editor to go over my story.

Need an* editor

Could* really

Done

 

[Balladeer08]

Hey. This is my first time submitting a story to this site. I ould really use an editor to go over my story.

In the first place, it is AN editor.

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