Need a bit of help

[Sweetpeeee]

my first story was rejected due to some punctuation errors in the dialogue...would love for someone to have a read through and help me correct the flaws so i can resubmit

 

[Recidiva]

my first story was rejected due to some punctuation errors in the dialogue...would love for someone to have a read through and help me correct the flaws so i can resubmit

I'll take a look at it if you'd like.

 

[Sweetpeeee]

I'll take a look at it if you'd like.

thank you okay how do i go about sending it to you? or should i post it here?

 

[Recidiva]

thank you okay how do i go about sending it to you? or should i post it here?

Send it to recidiva@cfl.rr.com

 

[Sweetpeeee]

Send it to recidiva@cfl.rr.com

thank you i just sent it

 

[Recidiva]

Got it! I'm working my way through it, I'll send it back with notes!

 

[Sweetpeeee]

Got it! I'm working my way through it, I'll send it back with notes!

thank you sooo much!

 

[Recidiva]

thank you sooo much!

My pleasure! Glad to help

 

[Sweetpeeee]

My pleasure! Glad to help

LOL im really nervous now

 

[Recidiva]

LOL im really nervous now

I'll be nice

 

[Sweetpeeee]

I'll be nice

thank you sooooo much for your help...am going to resubmit it now *bites nails*

 

[Recidiva]

thank you sooooo much for your help...am going to resubmit it now *bites nails*

You're welcome!

 

[Sweetpeeee]

You're welcome!

lol now back to playing the waiting game to see if its accepted

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I Can Help

lol now back to playing the waiting game to see if its accepted

I feel underutilized. I have a lot of editing experience and, as a hopeful writer and an experienced adult educator, I believe I have mentoring skills. I can help with ideas and formulation.

Check out my works. I'm ASYLUMSEEKER

 

[Sweetpeeee]

I feel underutilized. I have a lot of editing experience and, as a hopeful writer and an experienced adult educator, I believe I have mentoring skills. I can help with ideas and formulation.

Check out my works. I'm ASYLUMSEEKER

thank you for the offer AS but my story was approved thank you sooooo much Recidiva