Need a bit of help w/ my fanfiction

[MissxVenomxPoison91]

I'm in a bit of a jam with my fanfiction and stuck on Chapter 8 of my story. So far my OC is giving her husband (canon character) a blowjob while they wait for a cab back to their hotel from a reunion date to get him aroused. He doesn't want to cum yet and neither does she want him to cum.
How can I write her teasing him?

 

[HeyAll]

What other details are there?

 

[Hypoxia]

Blow. Stop. Tickle. Stop. Talk politics or firestorms. Stop. Wait for cab. No problem.

 

[MissxVenomxPoison91]

What other details are there?

"Maybe we can fuck on our hotel balcony." I pondered while staring at Molly's beautiful breasts while I caressed her bottom "I'd rather we not fuck in a public place especially since the press has been saying horrible things about you."

* * ** "Mmmm lead the way back home babe." Molly whispered as she grabbed my arm and rest her head against my shoulder "I really am horny for you my love." She quickly lit herself a cigarette while I kissed her neck before lighting myself a cigar. I started to grab at her breasts while we both smoked...God..I wanted to take her to the hotel and fuck her so bad. I wanted to dominate and punish her but that will have to wait another day.

* * * "God I want to fuck you so bad Molly" I talked dirty in her ear as I took a drag of my cigar "Ahhh I want to make you scream out of excitement as I slide my cock everywhere inside you." I started feeling my hand on her juicy breasts as I started grinding my crotch onto Molly who took one last drag of her cigarette before she started to touch her crotch before I hailed a taxi.

* * "Does my pussy excite you still?" Molly moaned rubbing her crotch "I'm getting so fucking wet anticipating you punishing me, dominating me, making me completely yours." She moaned as she pulled me closer to her and descended down to the crotch of my pants unzipping them as she pulled my cock out and gently made her way to the head. My heart skipped a beat as I arch my back to Molly giving me head.

* * * "Oh Molly." I moaned softly as Molly bobbed her tongue up and down rubbing her juicy boobs against my cock. Each time the head of my cock gets close, she extends her tongue, striving to get a taste.

* * "Fuck yeah" I cried out feeling my heart* race and my cock ache "Feels so good but I don't want to cum just yet. Besides the taxi will be here in a few and man, I want to come inside your horny pussy tonight."

This is written in Alden's POV (he's the canon husband)

 

[JonathanBair]

I'm in a bit of a jam with my fanfiction and stuck on Chapter 8 of my story. So far my OC is giving her husband (canon character) a blowjob while they wait for a cab back to their hotel from a reunion date to get him aroused. He doesn't want to cum yet and neither does she want him to cum.
How can I write her teasing him?

Hate to say it, but starting the bj then stopping and kissing or something like that to let him clam down before going back down to get him worked back up... over and over again if needed might be the best way to do it. maybe if there is a stand or something near by. have her slip in the middle of the stand and her hubby. She can give him a bj and kiss the legs while being out of sight from folks while being out in public. She can stay bent over kissing his leg or belly while he cools down.