Verycurious18
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I enjoyed 50 Shades but overall found the writing to be very sophomoric. I actually liked the story better than the sex scenes which I felt were poorly written.
I read the last two books, and summarized the first. A few of the sex scenes were fine but it felt overplayed and pathetic at times. IMO!
Second book was by far the favorite of them, I felt the third book had so much unnecessary drama. Again IMO!
I did love the scene where he crumbles to his knees, begging her not to Go. Helped me realize a dom needs their sub just as much as the sub needs their dom!
Anyways, as far as any other erotic reads I'm very limited. I have read a fee stories posted to lit, I'm more of a writer then a read though.