My vanity feedback page (please don't laugh)

[PoliteSuccubus]

Coz I don't want them in my inbox forever, and this is the frist time so many people have read anything I've written, and I feel proud and awkard and shy all the same time....

Older Women/Younger Men-Flim Review

Excellent and illuminating!
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Well done. But, given the title of the website "litEROTICA" it would have been
really interesting to give an erotic description of the main characters and the
specific nature of their interaction -- AND THEN INCLUDE THE SENSITIVE STUFF.
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Nice, useful review. I have seen some of these films, though not all of them. I
have heard it said that the idea of people being "punished" for sexual affairs
is an American thing.
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Tea and Sympathy is also a noteable movie on the subject. Made is the mid 50's I
believe
it was very racey for the times.
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Thanks for the OW/YM review, Polly (if that diminutive of PoliteSuccubus is OK).

Can you do another dealing with OM/YW, please?I could, I guess, but I haven't done much research in that area....
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Hi thank you for this set of mini-reviews around one particular theme! It's a
refreshing change from older men/younger women!
An older woman,

Summer Cottage-Group sex (Threesome)

I just read your story "Summer Cottage". I found it very interesting. You put
words to a fantasy that some women have.
One day I was at a nude beach. There were three guys togeather on a blanket.
One gave some head to one of his friends. Then one guy who was hung like a
horse proceded to enter one of his friends and give him the full length. There
were several of us that stood there and watched. It started a small orgy right
there on the beach. It was a great afternoon with much pleasure.
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This hopeless romantic is delighted with the overall plot of your story. I
just think that it should have taken a LOT LONGER for Keith's effort to comfort
Donna to become erotic in nature.

Even better yet, this transition ought to begin as Donna seriously worries
whether she is still 'young enough' to have another opportunity for marriage and
motherhood. Keith and Mark would thus have reason to carefully assess the
asthetic qualities of Donna's body, slowly undressing her in the process.
Indeed, as their exploration of her body became increasingly intimate, Keith
must allow Mark his very first detailed exploration of these otherwise well
hidden parts of a woman's body.

The exploration in turn becomes increasingly sexual in nature until neither one
of them can resist the pleasure of sliding Keith's cock into Donna's cunt. This
likewise becomes Mark's first opportunity to observe heterosexual intercourse.

Just because I have a tough time with anal sex, I would prefer that she gently
invited Mark to do likewise. But that extension of the story really ought to
occur as all three of them wake up totally naked in the same bed the next
morning!I responded to this letter, and that response is in another thread
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I've not come across your postings before, but have just read and very much
enjoyed 'Summer Cottage'. I look forward to hecking out your other stories.
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Fucktastic story!! More, please.


Annon Feedback to Story they didn't mention the title of asks...

Liked your story I just read. I'm in Juneau...do you ever come here?...

The Night Nurse-Non Consent

Hi there,

Just mailing you to say the night nurse story, very hot, not nearly enough
stories like it, hope you write more.
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Hello Polite,

How are you today?

I have just been reading your story "The night nurse" and I really liked it.
It´s has been a fantasy of mine, laying in the hospital being so vulnerabel and
exposed. And being taken advantage of by a mature nurse, I enjoyed reading it
very much.

I even got an erection from reading it, I hope that was your intent otherwise I
am sorry.

I also read your reviews on the movies and I will check out some of them. I have
seen a couple of them but far from all ot them.

Have a nice day and take care of yourself.
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PoliteSuccubus,
I just read "The Night Nurse" Its quite a story, I'm at once turned on,
laughing and horrified!--
Keep up the great work!
Thanks,
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Hi PoliteSuccubus! I just finished your "The Night Nurse" and it was wonderful!
I just wish it was happening to me! Especially by your picture if it was you! As
I mentioned earlier I love BBW and seeing your tiny picture just makes it that
much more erotic for me! I hope you have many more wonderful stories in the
works! Til the next wonderful story keep those delicious creative juices flowing
and great stories cumin! Your totally devoted fan!
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The Night Nurse is wonderful, a truly new and refreshing story, and written with
wonderful attention to the emotions of both and the bodily dynamics of their
coupling. Brava!!

The Accidental Laying of Amy-Frist Time

Do a sequal! PLEASE!!
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Hi PoliteSuccubus! I just finished your "The Accidental Laying of Amy" and I
enjoyed it very much! Not the usual ending for a story in Literotica! But
probably happens more often then we want to realize! I hope you have many more
wonderful stories to share with us! In your bio you mentioned you were large! I
happen to love BBW and hope you will write yourself into your stories! A woman
is beautiful and her size has nothing to do with it! Til the next wonderful
story keep those delicious creative juices flow and great stories cumin! Your
totally devoted fan!
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Your story is very well written. Nice picture in your "bio". Do you have a
bigger one - that shows you more clearly?
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I must say that your own tenderness is evident from your writings.
I hope you find your happiness.
Oh and I hope you keep on writing nice stories.
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Nicely written story. I have a feeling that part(s) of the story were true,
perhaps involving yourself even.

I read your bio (1st time for me) and feel connected to you somehow. Don't
know how to explain the feeling.

My Lover-Poem

Hi there!

I just wanted to tell you that I love your poems, I can tell that you are a
talented writer.

So I went to your webpage and read about you opinion on age diffrence.
And as you said it´s not "allowed" for a woman to be together with a young man,
but totally ok for a 55 year old man to be with a 24 year old woman. I have been
in a relationship with a 38 year old woman and I am 24, but neiter my parents or
my friends thought it was ok. Why is that?, I mean my passion is for older
mature women why can´t I be allowed to be together with whom I want.

Of course I know you don´t have the answers to my problems but I am glad that
you think the same way.

Well anyway I hope that you will keep on writing, and I hope that you will post
some of your ideas on literotica about young men and mature women.

 

[PoliteSuccubus]

This thread was posted on Author's Hangout

But it made some folks cranky, so I moved it here.

I hope no one gets cranky here!

I'm getting ready to srub my hard drive and install a new OP...but also...Well, I don't have a lot to be vain about, and I'm proud. I've never published anywhere, really, before. And I'm trying to build up enough self-esteem to try to publish for pay.

 

[PoliteSuccubus]

RE: The Accidental Laying of Amy

Too many errors, check your work more carefully next time.

Thank you, it was my frist story submission and when I realized how many errors was in it I was like "Oh great! Now everyone will know I'm a maroon!" But, I have now learned, you CAN resubmit already posted stories and Laurel and her kind staff will (when they can) delete the old story and replace it with the corrected one.

Too cool!

Two new stories in the works for my Survior Contest: Fetish and Incest!

 

[PoliteSuccubus]

RE: Night Nurse

Every night, after midnight, he could hear her tell the other nurse that she was
taking her lunch break ???? 'Taking' her lunch break, and at that hour? It doesn't matter when your mid shift is, as long as your eating, it's usually your "lunch break". I've worked many shifts over the years, and even my 3 AM break was still a lunch break

squeak shoes ???? squeaking or squeaky Not an ajective, maybe I should have put squeak-shoes, but....you don't put a hyphen in tennis shoes....

Could sense his fear and disgust - Very poor grammar Shrugs, I did say I was trying to improve.

belly roiled ?? rolled? Shrugs. roiled : ADJECTIVE: 1. Violently disturbed or agitated, as by storms: dirty, heavy, raging, roily, rough, rugged, stormy, tempestuous, tumultuous, turbulent, ugly, violent, wild. See CALM. 2. Having sediment or foreign particles stirred up or suspended: cloudy, muddy, murky, roily, turbid. From
Roget’s II: The New Thesaurus, Third Edition. 1995.


Hope crashed that tonight would be quick... Sorry but this doesn't make sense
either. Shrugs, again. I guess it has to do with speech patterns. I'll try to keep a better eye on it though.

I skimmed over the rest.

This story idea is fine, but you need an good editor. Then why sign Annon? I'm not at all offended by what you have to say.
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Thanks for reading my stuff, and I mean that truly. How can I grow as a writer if people don't tell me what they think of it?