My Stories

[emma_sub]

i've only been writing 3 months and i made the stupid mistake of initially typing in my email incorrectly so could anyone give me constructive crit of my stories?
i would be appreciative. i need all the help i can get from all the helpers i can get. Thanks love you. m

 

[KillerMuffin]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=13801

 

[p_p_man]

Very readable...

All your stories kept my attention to the very end. Highly readable. And you've been writing for only 3 months? Hmmm...

 

[Ravenswing]

I just read 'The Analyst and Mrs White' and I was going to send feedback, but couldn't so I hope you get to read this.

Good story, especially that last section. It read like you'd been there yourself. Very sexy, well written, and there's that vague feeling that a good hypnotist and a willing subject could produce it for real.

If I've got to criticise, I stumbled over a couple of places where you had got your fingers twisted: repeated words, tenses changing half-way through sentences, that kind of thing.

I shall be reading more of your work, it's too good to leave unread for long.

Ravenswing

 

[ericlove]

I LOVE your stories, Emma. My favorite is "The Hypno-Submission Of Jenny." I still hope you will continue with more chapters.
I also really enjoyed your newest one, "Keeping It In The Family," and hope for more chapters of it, as well.