iron_man_4750
Virgin
- Joined
- Oct 1, 2002
- Posts
- 17
Hey all , I just wanted you to check out my first story which was approved just recently I dont know if its been posted yet but the name of it is My Celebrity Fantasies and I have one I just submitted called The book its about mind control. so please read it and tell me what you think I need the feedback so if my story sucks tell me it does because i need to know what people think to get better.
