I just posted my first story yesterday and was hoping to get some feedback. I realized after publishing that I had failed to catch some minor errors (a few typos, missing punctuation, etc) and have already submitted an updated version pending approval. Really what I need help with is feedback on world building, descriptions, pacing, etc. My idea is to use this world for an anthology series, but I want to tighten it up on the next one to make it immersive and interesting.
A World Now Ours
Please let me know what you think!
A World Now Ours
Please let me know what you think!
